There are some parts that I don't really get why did you make it that way on the hair specially on the back and side parts.
But those eye and lips are just perfect, keep up the goodwork, mate.
But those eye and lips are just perfect, keep up the goodwork, mate.
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Originally Posted by regotten
I love your art Chab <3
Honestly really well made, all of it.
Keep being great bb <3
thank you! it means a lot <3
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Originally Posted by Raiken
There are some parts that I don't really get why did you make it that way on the hair specially on the back and side parts.
But those eye and lips are just perfect, keep up the goodwork, mate.
thanks!
also back parts of the hair i can understand because i didn't really work much on it. about the side parts, i wanted to try some color mix and if you are talking about the yellow shade then its just light coming from the spiral but now that i look at it, it is a bit too bright.
Last edited by poison; Nov 5, 2017 at 07:24 PM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
GLAD TO SEE YOU AROUND CHABBBBBZ <3
Oh dude that's a masterpiece, the eyes, the hair, the shading, it all looks so consistent.
Ima cnc a little bit, so i dont get an infraction, *cough*.
I think you could work a little more on the eye shading tho, it looks a little too simple when compared to the other wips, also the lips, they are a little small or.. ugh.. stretched I think? It's me so not a big deal tho, looks amazing as usual.
I loved the head, if I had tcs I would definetly buy it to my collection
Keep the amazing job my dude, expecting some more stuff from ya <3
Oh dude that's a masterpiece, the eyes, the hair, the shading, it all looks so consistent.
I think you could work a little more on the eye shading tho, it looks a little too simple when compared to the other wips, also the lips, they are a little small or.. ugh.. stretched I think? It's me so not a big deal tho, looks amazing as usual.
I loved the head, if I had tcs I would definetly buy it to my collection
Keep the amazing job my dude, expecting some more stuff from ya <3
Originally Posted by Haku
GLAD TO SEE YOU AROUND CHABBBBBZ <3
Oh dude that's a masterpiece, the eyes, the hair, the shading, it all looks so consistent.
Ima cnc a little bit, so i dont get an infraction, *cough*.
I think you could work a little more on the eye shading tho, it looks a little too simple when compared to the other wips, also the lips, they are a little small or.. ugh.. stretched I think? It's me so not a big deal tho, looks amazing as usual.
I loved the head, if I had tcs I would definetly buy it to my collection
Keep the amazing job my dude, expecting some more stuff from ya <3
hello haku <3
thanks! and yeah i noticed that the mouth is small, i'll try to fix my mapping on the next texture i make. also, i don't know if i'll be selling this head x)
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first of all, thanks for taking time to give feedback about my head!
Originally Posted by BenDover
The eyepatch is smudgy and using black to shade on colour is generally not a good idea.
this is the thing i have learned from artists and i just simply forgot about it and haven't noticed that i used black to shade, so that is my mistake.
Originally Posted by BenDover
The mouth is too small for its position on the sphere, its small on the flat, but on the sphere its just minuscule and the lower lip has been stretched substantially.
now that you mentioned it, it does look stretched at the bottom lip and yeah i also noticed that the flat on the sphere made the mouth really small and you really can't notice the detail anymore.
Originally Posted by BenDover
The jawline youve drawn has been a debate among texturers for years now, personally not a fan of the line youve taken, gives her a double chin on the sphere and looks like stewie from family guy on the sphere.
haha, that's actually true now that i look at it. i'll try to make the jawline less double chin looking as possible next time.
Originally Posted by BenDover
Anyway, its your most complete head yet and the fact that theres alot to comment on says something about it.
Stuff I like, stuff I dont like.
thank you so much for the tips and i'm still improving as an artist so i still have a lot more to learn for sure!
Last edited by poison; Nov 7, 2017 at 12:35 PM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
