i viewed the head ingame, can we try the tears being completely opaque black?
And the band aid doesn't really go well with the tears i'd say, but you did mention you'll send me a version of the head with the band aid and without it.
and the back side of the head i realized is just different from the ref pic.
how about reverting the teeth back without the sharp edges.
the ref pic shows that the back side is more of something undead, i think the nose of the back side makes the face more like a vicious monster instead of something more skeletal in my opinion. But maybe it's just the teeth.

That fits my taste pretty well. I’ll PM you the payment