Bump

Hours.... You....
Anyway new replay. Not quite satisfied with it so I'll
probably end up editing it at some point.

The opening kick was great, though the dms you got was quite messy since you used your shin rather than your knee. The boom was also good, but it looked a little unclean. And I can see the part where you're unsatisfied. That final kick could be a pretty awesome boom but for now, it's quite alright.

Great replay man.

As always, great flow. A great surprise was the opener, which also had great flow. First kick was good, but it could've been better. As for the second kick, it was great. Had a nice impact, 4DM boom (I think), and a cool looking pull back.

Now, I know you didn't ask for it, but I edited the replay, fixing the ending kick to break both legs. Make it a big boom c: .

Actually TamaKuu, if you look closely I did break both legs.
Thanks for the edit anyway, I am planning on fixing the second
launch a bit more, and hopefully getting a on dose legs.
Edit: I love the pose, better than mine.

So like, hi.

The opener, first kick and the grab were great, keep them...

As Spry said, the second kick was messy, just a few tweaks and it'd be a lot better.

But yeah, I would suggest reworking on that and everything after that, as everything after looked rushed.

Thanks I guess, but I'm sorta hoping for actual comments and criticism.
Anyway new replay, not a full tricking, more of a test for back kicks or whatever
kind of kick this is since I wasn't that good at them.

Jesus, Hours, you really like those words don't you.

Those were well paced kicks, I love it. I have no problems with the opener though, I don't see why anyone should.

Bumpin.