Toribash
Okay, like april said, the opener seemed to be really slow, when you contracted your knee, i didn't take too kindly to it. that one leg movement bothered me,maybe find a better way to get into the position.

from 717 to 600 to me, looked sloppy, it wasn't a very good way transition to a jump towards uke.

The first boomhit looked off, mainly because you used your knee instead of your Foot to boom him with, you got too close to his chest area to do anything about that because of the spin...Skipping ahead...

What you did to get to uke's lower half seemed to be awkward and i wasn't so pleased with it. As you picked up his body, that looked okay i suppose. When you switched hands and then kicked, that looked okay as well. you coulda done something so your arm would faze inside of your leg.

The last boom kick, it seemed boring. Also It had such nice and precise aim to it, but in the end it the arm fazed into your leg and fucked up the look of the kick, in my eyes.

You got lazy and didn't bother to have your tori stand or do some kinda pose at the end of the replay.

I'll give it a 7/10, I've seen you do better.
Last edited by Dobby; Apr 23, 2013 at 11:16 PM.
New replay!
I can't stop thanking all the people who always check this replay thread out.
So uh, thank you. ;)
Psst, Dob, I'm standing up in the end.
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Alright first thing to say. Loved the opener so much I could watch that all day.
I like the Glute dms but it looks as if you contracted too fast after you got them.
The decap was outstanding.The boom was really unique and I like it.

9/10
every day you keep improving and improving at an amazing speed. i really loved this one, specially the opener and the boom. like internet said, it is very unique.

too bad that groins are so god damn stupid, it would be even better if it came off

there's one thing i'd like to see you try, which is less grabbing. you have potential for that
Good opener, wierd ass kick. 2 dm crotch kicks are not my thing, but it was pretty clean and didn't look like you were having a seizure.
The push to keep Uke in mid air was actually cool, and you made great use of your arm there for the kick aiming.
Boomhit was strange, the dms came one after another and it looked like you didn't have a very good angle. Still that elbow dm with just the tip of the toe was impressive.
Good pose but posing in -30 is piss so no credit for you.
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Originally Posted by pusga View Post
Good pose but posing in -30 is piss so no credit for you.

I didn't get that part. :v
Do you mean you don't want people to pose in -30 replays?
Also what is this puss in boots invation?
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Originally Posted by ZeTo View Post
Also what is this puss in boots invation?

don't ask me i'm the one having my thunder stolen

Also what I mean is that posing in -30 is pretty easy if you don't fall to the ground and fall on your head.
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Originally Posted by pusga View Post
don't ask me i'm the one having my thunder stolen

Also what I mean is that posing in -30 is pretty easy if you don't fall to the ground and fall on your head.

pusga what is it tell me

I guess, but the real hard part about it is due to your tori being heavy you really need to have a steady position while in default grav you can float around like a pretty ballerina.

Thanks for the cnc all y'all bbys.
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