Toribash
thx fellow drunk

2nd replay is a selfspar for those who do those
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Last edited by sSLight; Oct 13, 2015 at 12:13 PM.
gems stems phlegms~
Didn't like the form of decap that you applied in this replay.
The stiffness of the hands in this replay didn't really take upon my liking either.
Aswell as you kept your right pec extended and right shoulder raised for too long starting from around frame:350.
Otherwise nice replay love the dms.

vital statistician~
I can't really CnC self spars since I haven't done any.
But I loved the movement in this, some parts were really clear and smooth.
Hits and aggressivity in this replay is quite nice.
It's just some hits were quite strange and unnecessary.
Otherwise great stuff.
sleepy
gems:
Not your best.
The opener was iffy and had no style to it. Knee bruise before knee dm wasn't very appealing to the eye.
decap looked accidental which a decap should never do.
The rest of the kciks were ugly and had no fluidness to it.
spin flip thing was boring as it had no momentum.

Meh, you can do better.
|Opener by Xioi|#KillTheScootCork|
|Replays|
"Cool delfin med solglajjor" -Larfen
although that opener was really iffy, your dms are like crazy dude. i'd love to see those kinds of dms allied with some really slick openers, you would be like Dscigs level of killing with internet level of openers.
oh yeah
thanks lovyu. i struggle with openers a lot, so they usually end up shittier than the rest of the replay.
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Last edited by sSLight; Oct 18, 2015 at 04:20 PM.
the way you change your momentum in the opener is a bit weird, i'd loved it if you had done it a bit smoother.

the lift is meh cuz its more like a push than a lift (maybe try to get a bit more under uke with your leg).

however, the follow up is nice and the next hit looks more like something you did to keep uke in the air and not like something to manipulate his movement.

third manip hit is alright, maybe you could have got a bit more spinny momentum for uke if your leg was a bit extended and then you contract it under ukes foot to push it upwards.

the dms are cool but i expected a 2dm kick from you and not a simple split (doesnt matter that much)
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