bullshit
in default you extend your ankle and you just fly everywhere, it's impossible to pose. in -30 you can just extend your hips and knees and tada a pose
you're welcome.

Fwam, new replay.
I personally really like the pose.

Your arm and leg looked incredibly twitchy at 730. Everything else about the opener was okay.
Cool decap, but why the hell would you just reverse everything like that?
Boomhit looked alright, not very solid though.
The next one was a bit better. It looked like you had a bad angle but you still got it.
Pose looked good.
One thing I disliked is how you grabbed for 3 out of 4 hits. I have nothing against grabbing but when it's excessive it just becomes not enjoyable for me.

This is the first time I have no idea what you're talking about.
What decap did I reverse badly? :v

After the split you're rotating right and then you grab Uke and you just go left all of a sudden, not even a little bit of vertical rotation to mask it :u

It's actually not that hard.

Anywho, opener was nothing out of the ordinary. Could say it was generic.
Your arms are way too stiff from time to time.
About the rotation problem, there were other ways to get to dm'ing the torso, I think I'd prefer to have seen that way than grabbing him and switching your flow.
The way you held your leg right after contact on the boom of the upper body didn't give the kick that look of destruction it deserved. Meaning, it looked weaker than it should have. Also, this is from a personal view point, but it felt like the kick was too close. The look of those kind of hits aren't appealing imo.
The little sweep you did to transition to the next hit was fancy, but try not to have a knee fully extended like that. Just looks stiff, even if it's around a couple of 30 frames or so.
Anyway, the boom on the glutes and crotch block was nice, but try not to hit from such a weird position. Not about you, but the way uke's lower body was positioned in your grab looked weird. The look of the actual hit felt degraded from this.
That little turn around you did was alright. You let your leg contract a bit too far, making your leg extend in mid-air. You brought it down to touch the floor while it was still extended. Stiffness, etc.
The last dm was unneeded since you didn't make it look good. And the spin afterwards was pretty derpy.
Finally, I'm assuming you wanted to try something different in a pose, but this one didn't work out. Try making it more stable instead of slowly leaning forward next time.


There's nothing wrong with elbow dm's. It's just that people are not used to seeing them since not a lot of replay makers use them.
But, in this case, it was an inner elbow dm, so, whatevs.

I don't remember anyone having to ask before they call someone on their bullshit. Your logic is flawed.
It is afterall a replay and is made to look good. The technique used shouldn't matter at all.


So back to the cnc. The opener was good imo even though the first 30 frames didn't feel very unique. Even though it's very subtle, I like how you didn't go too low when you turned around. Not putting your limbs to their extremes will make you look pro when used correctly and in the right situations.
Then at the dm the free leg felt a bit floppy. I can't really explain it in a good way but that could've been a bit better. For the decap i like how you switched place with your legs. Was very fluid in it's own way, without being relaxed. The longer you can keep a flow like that the better it will look. Butterflykick surprised me but didn't really look bad at all. Your arms was twitchy on some occasions but overall it was nice. The spin throughout the replay was nice.

You just contradicted yourself. I gave my own opinion on your CnC. Stop whining.

Well, that was rude, also there is nothing wrong with someone commenting on your post, if they don't agree then they don't agree. No need for the rudeness.

Also stop sucking up to Zeto. Doesn't make you look good ;c

CNC FOR THE REPLAY

You twitch so much man come on! Your leg fazes through your leg when you boomed uke's torso.

Your opener is the same old thing i see, twisting your torso and using your arm to turn yourself around, same damn thing. You need to do something else besides the same thing in different replays.

When you did the first kick that was OK but again, the same style jump and kicking i've seen you do all the time. You grabbed uke and swung back to kick him in the torso i didn't like that either really. Your friggen toe jumps again, seeing the same things, the toe jump looked unappealing in my eyes, I suggest coming up with another way to get to his lower half, or atleast a better jump. when you kicked his crotch, i personally would like to see a more solid kick. instead of bushing your foot onto his ass and somehow getting a boom.

I dont know what you were trying to accomplish when you did during 400 to 250 that all looked pointless, so was the last DM. It would have looked better if you would have just pose. You did way too much for a awkward grab dm.

Finally the ending pose, it was not appealing to me in the least. It would have looked better if you relaxed something, but you held all and made your whole body twitch.

Your style is getting repetitive... To me it looks like your just trying to go for boom hits, not really caring about anything else.

6.8/10.

-30 gravity manipulation.
Hue.