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Well okay but note that i'm not very good at deciphering implied meanings, i'm just some dude who likes drawing goofy faces. :v

First thought: McNoodles? Looks a lot like THE M in the background, though i sense that that's intentional. The noodles kind of look more like amorphous goop than a bunch of noodles; remember that noodles are (usually) long and unbroken strands, so the lines should be long and flowing. What i'd do is to first make a few main lumps of noodles and then bullshit my way through with some lines that more or less follow the outlines of the lumps. Also remember that if things are stuck into the noodles, the lines would go around these things (unless it's like a super sharp thing that just punches a hole clean through instead of shoving the noodles aside). Small detail, i know, but small details make up the whole. :v

Besides a few things that could be solved with practice (i.e. keeping the stripes on the bowl mostly parallel), there is just one more thing that bugs me: Them shadows m8. While it's not impossible to have two (relatively faint) shadows by means of having two light sources, please smooth that out. Again, small detail, but keeping them in mind can really pay off!

Technical stuff besides, i could actually see this being an album cover; it's sufficiently artsy and cryptic. :v
Originally Posted by Marrez View Post
the faces are cash

i smell a collab

B[

I'd be okay with that, provided that peoples expectations from me are sufficiently low. :v

Originally Posted by WeooWeoo View Post
Shook is my only legend friend (probably one sided :v) He is also my Senpai when it comes to art.

Edit:

Did this

doop


HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

i approve

Also nah it's not one sided, you're a pretty cool dude. :v
<Blam|Homework> oiubt veubg
various places to find me lol
Thanks man. This was pretty much my first ever digital art thing so I'm happy to see your advice. I'll keep this in mind next time I draw noodles and shadows I guess.

Oh, and the M is actually both an M and an A which are the first letters for my name and my friends.
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Yeah now that you say it, i can totally see that. The middle line in the A is a bit far up, though. :v

also you're welcome noodle drawing is serious business you know

also lawyerfox

[lawyering intensifies]

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Originally Posted by Shook View Post
also lawyerfox

[lawyering intensifies]


i just saw an animal
is this a step towards publicly announcing yourself a furry
i want to commission coldsteel the hedgehogXshrek art~

Originally Posted by Ukephile View Post
And i can`t figure out how many pics rhis gif has, because the dog isn`t moving peridically D:

i am bad at visual but i think it looks like 3 frames to me.
oh yeah
Yep, 3 frames, and at around 30 FPS (the delay is specifically 30 ms which would explain why there's an occasional double-frame). I specifically pick 3 frames over 2 because it's much harder to pick out the individual frames. :v

Originally Posted by pusga View Post
i just saw an animal
is this a step towards publicly announcing yourself a furry
i want to commission coldsteel the hedgehogXshrek art~

>.>

<.<

Gnoll Horse Archer is probably more incriminating in that regard. :v
Basically, while i wouldn't claim to be devoid of furriness at all, my view of it is very Disney-esque, i.e. i (like to) see them as cartoon characters. I'm not much for the rampant Mary Sue snowflake tendencies though, nor do i concern myself with things like exact species or gratuitous self-insertion. I mean fuck, i don't even have a fursona, how am i supposed to be a furry without one of those? :U (that besides, my imagination is too lively to settle down on one creature to represent myself so blub)

Originally Posted by Ukephile View Post
Hehe I love your comics. They always make me smil c:

Hee, thanks, i'm glad to hear that! c:
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various places to find me lol
Shook has a shapeshifter fursona. So he isnt forced to settle for one creature but can attend furry cons.


On a side note: Thanks for this sanctuary shook!
This is probably the most cheerful place on the forum :^)
Never fails to amuse me atleast.

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Well hey, thank you guys for letting me have it like this! It could have turned into a peerless shitfest within the first two pages (after which i'd close it without second thought), but nay, it has kept going for over 1000 posts and the amount of times i've had to put on my stern hat can still be counted on my hands, and there's only one banned user. So, give yourselves a pat on the back, because this is why we CAN have nice things. c:

Originally Posted by Reta View Post
Shook has a shapeshifter fursona. So he isnt forced to settle for one creature but can attend furry cons.

hell naw

I get nervous just thinking about that. I don't even want to go to game cons (i hate being in huge crowds), so you're unlikely to ever find me NEAR a furry con. I mean, in game cons i'd at least be on home territory since i'm an avid gamer, but i'm really not invested enough in the furry fandom to even consider going to a con. :U

Really though, i think that whole "constantly roleplay as your character whenever possible" deal is weird as hell, and that's coming from me. I mean, i'm not going to tell them to stop if they really enjoy it, but to me it's like, why wouldn't you be yourself? Fictional characters can be nice and all, but i've found real people to ultimately be much more interesting; they don't just have one or two gimmicks (or dicks) that define them, each and every one of them has a life and personality as complex as your own. Fictional characters can be considered relatively deep if they have two distinct sides to them, but real people have oh so many more. Using myself as an example, i can be goofy and fun-loving, quiet and introspective, hellishly determined, outspoken and angry, paralyzed by anxiety, and hell, even sad and vulnerable. That's only a partial list, and every single person out there has a list like that, so i'm not special by any means. Our brains really want to simplify other people, and that's probably a good thing; they're plenty occupied just trying to handle one life. :v

And hey, that turned out to be a pretty big chunk of text. That's what i get for staying up late in order to hydrate properly. Hail hydrate i guess. :U

Edit: Also disclaimer, i totally understand that roleplaying can be a lot of fun (after all, i do tabletop), i just don't see why people would flat out replace themselves. I mean sure, we all have quirks that we'd rather be without, but i don't think that any of the characters i've made would be able to take my place in this world, even disregarding physical limitations.
Last edited by Shook; Jun 7, 2016 at 12:45 AM.
<Blam|Homework> oiubt veubg
various places to find me lol
Oiiiiiiiii

I tried again and took some of your advice with shading and lighting. Does this look better?

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He's scared of his shadow

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Originally Posted by Shook View Post
Well hey, thank you guys for letting me have it like this! It could have turned into a peerless shitfest within the first two pages (after which i'd close it without second thought), but nay, it has kept going for over 1000 posts and the amount of times i've had to put on my stern hat can still be counted on my hands, and there's only one banned user. So, give yourselves a pat on the back, because this is why we CAN have nice things. c:


hell naw

I get nervous just thinking about that. I don't even want to go to game cons (i hate being in huge crowds), so you're unlikely to ever find me NEAR a furry con. I mean, in game cons i'd at least be on home territory since i'm an avid gamer, but i'm really not invested enough in the furry fandom to even consider going to a con. :U

Really though, i think that whole "constantly roleplay as your character whenever possible" deal is weird as hell, and that's coming from me. I mean, i'm not going to tell them to stop if they really enjoy it, but to me it's like, why wouldn't you be yourself? Fictional characters can be nice and all, but i've found real people to ultimately be much more interesting; they don't just have one or two gimmicks (or dicks) that define them, each and every one of them has a life and personality as complex as your own. Fictional characters can be considered relatively deep if they have two distinct sides to them, but real people have oh so many more. Using myself as an example, i can be goofy and fun-loving, quiet and introspective, hellishly determined, outspoken and angry, paralyzed by anxiety, and hell, even sad and vulnerable. That's only a partial list, and every single person out there has a list like that, so i'm not special by any means. Our brains really want to simplify other people, and that's probably a good thing; they're plenty occupied just trying to handle one life. :v

And hey, that turned out to be a pretty big chunk of text. That's what i get for staying up late in order to hydrate properly. Hail hydrate i guess. :U

Edit: Also disclaimer, i totally understand that roleplaying can be a lot of fun (after all, i do tabletop), i just don't see why people would flat out replace themselves. I mean sure, we all have quirks that we'd rather be without, but i don't think that any of the characters i've made would be able to take my place in this world, even disregarding physical limitations.

hail hydrate

also, damn, i want to tabletop again

i need to learn how to play or host pathfinder

Originally Posted by WeooWeoo View Post
Oiiiiiiiii

I tried again and took some of your advice with shading and lighting. Does this look better?

LA FOTOGRAPHÍA GRANDE



He's scared of his shadow

shading on this is really well done
Last edited by Marrez; Jun 7, 2016 at 08:51 PM.
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Originally Posted by WeooWeoo View Post
Oiiiiiiiii

I tried again and took some of your advice with shading and lighting. Does this look better?

LA FOTOGRAPH&Iacute;A GRANDE



He's scared of his shadow

I wish the edges weren't so blurred >.< would look really realistic if it was
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