thanks guys

how about this one

The manip would have been very nice if Uke didn't touch the ground.
From all the hits, the last punch stood out the most. The abs kick was okay too, I just didn't like the second one that much.

Thanks.


New replay here, not too shabby, though I forgot how2replay :c

Supa fast opener, love it.
The first kick was great, but the second one had a really strange angle.
Awesome pose too. Pretty straight forward replay.

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

The opener started well but you made it too long, there was no reason to keep it going like that.
Nicely done decap, and the punch was pretty good too. I liked how you used your grab.
It seems like you were going for a punch but then gave up on it here and went for that punch-grab, which didn't look that great tbh.
The crotch kick was good, but that's about it.

Thanks guys. Here's something short in the meantime.

man, that was long

heh

The best part was when you pushed Uke with your leg up in the air. The hits were alright, I wasn't super impressed. The boomhit did look very solid though.
The part where you shoved your head into Uke's and the decap kick looked wierd, because shoving yourself into Uke isn't good and when kicking you extended both legs.