Toribash
Godfather
Was a little bit too slow, seemed a little bit more messy that it should've been. Liked the dms and the launch at the end, didn't quite like that the abs were a bit overextended and the knees-together movement at the end. The transition to the pose was yes.
In conclusion, I would like to say that it seems that you go more for killing uke than for movement. I don't want to give you any advice that would sound like I am better at this because I doubt it, So I just comment stuff. Yeah.
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File Name started off boring but then the buildup to the boom thingy (Not really) was fun

You should skeet DM the neck joint, though.

Couplet had a niceish opener

Don't like how your foot kinda was jammed on the ground when you spun though
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Originally Posted by Hacks View Post
that was perfect, you're getting really good

was it really perfect?

opener was generic and bad

decap looked weak

dms weren't anything special

i like that you held your neck t h a n k y o u

skeet wasnt needed, none really are unless its something really cool

you seemed to be really messy

your abs looked weird near the end, pose was iffy

ooooooooooo k ay yyyyyyyyyyy
hacks i swear to fucking god dont do this to me

the opener was actually really generic and boring, slow and awkward

the decap wasnt that stylish, its a decap he got by kicking ukes head w o w

the abs i was talking about frame 240, before you start arguing with me about this fucking replay you should probably post actual cnc. "perfect replay" isnt that helpful. neither is "youre getting really good"

also that skeet thing has been done so much, thats why its not as cool as you probably think. i could find the replays that ive seen with a skeet like that but i dont feel like wasting 20 years of my life

Originally Posted by Cat View Post
the opener was actually really generic and boring, slow and awkward

no. the opener was risky and it payed off. jumping into the air right off the bat in a replay puts you in a position that is in midair and with very few ways to get momentum. he used his arm to push himself fast enough for it to not look floaty. while it doesnt look very flashy and cool, it was impressive how he pulled it off and yes that can be a reason to be good
Originally Posted by Cat View Post
the decap wasnt that stylish, its a decap he got by kicking ukes head w o w

theres a huge difference between kicking ukes head and doing a reverse leg kick
Originally Posted by Cat View Post
also that skeet thing has been done so much, thats why its not as cool as you probably think. i could find the replays that ive seen with a skeet like that but i dont feel like wasting 20 years of my life

...what? a skeet that bounces off the floor (plus the fact that he threw the bodypart before it bounced off the floor) is overdone? im not even sure if youre joking anymore
edit: also the fact that it was momentum break. forgot to say that

about anything else i didnt mention
the hits would have only been decent if they hadnt been so clean
also another thing i would like to mention that ive already said, you hit and move around as if uke didnt exist. his bodyparts dont restrict your movement at all. watching this replay with /opt uke 0 makes it look like you are just moving around in -9.82

very good work



Originally Posted by Cat View Post
my opinions wrong

are you making fun of the exact same thing you did to hacks lol
Last edited by pusga; Mar 25, 2014 at 10:54 PM.
oh yeah
my opinions wrong

how was the opener pulled off well? i dont really think thats a reason for it to be good, it is a bit impressive but openers are meant to be the opening of the replay, i wanted to be impressed in a different other than it being hard.

no but they are both kicking ukes head

is the skeet really impressive, its kinda cool but its nothing amazing. i think it broke by his hand, i may be wrong. am i ever joking

the core i didnt like, the kick i admit was clean.
its true he never stops while destorying uke

im not saying its bad im just telling what i thought about it

jesus

2 much cnc for this replay
Why am I this popular what. Thanks for the cnc doods, I have the creators curse so I think it sucks because I can only see the flaws BUT OKAY YOU GUYS SEEM TO LIKE IT (except cat but that's her opinion and all are welcome yes).

Plus all the cool people argue over my replays in #ormo so go there pls thank you.
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OH GOD ITS DONE FINALLY. Pose took me forever hi.
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