Magnum: That opener wasn't very realistic, but I liked the trick that came out of it. The trick was cool, but please don't contract your elbows so much. The cork was decent, but it was too balled up. Work on your timing to get better height so you can lay out more. Work on your posing. Good job.

Sushi: I liked the opener, even though you were a bit flimsy looking. The first kick is great, but the added hits were pretty unnecessary and looked like you backed out of your original plan (I'd bet you were doing a manipulation). really nice first kick, but more damage is appreciated. Good decap and transition to the pose, but the pose wasn't fantastic. Great replay!

Tahnks skywhale, and no, i wasn't going for a manipulation. Those hits where not intentional at all to be honest. And yeah, thats probably my last cork ever. i don't do that sort of thing very often.

Also, i got a picture of the decap, looks pretty brutal tbh



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New replay, i gotta say, i am getting back into corks. this is just me training myself up to start doing that again, tell me how to improve pls.

not much to say except that i wish i could do it <3

Thx ;3

ok, i'm trying to understand what you are telling me, can you please give me a version of a proper cork so i can compare it to my one? That would be really nice. thanks ^^

Thanks, ill see what i can do to improve my cork so it looks more like that one
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Allright, i think i got the look. Now it's the speed that is remaining.

this one shot trickin replay looks even better ^.^

Thanks, theee
And here is the finished one.

+ this landing and pose *~* so banana.

What does that even mean? O-o