Cool concept, but I feel like the equalization on the synths and drums is a little off, also the drums feel like they could use a little of sidechaining and more head space. Also the panning of the snares feels a little too much, try making the snares hit a little closer to each other.
Lower the volume of the synths a little bit, make sure they don't blend together (equalization, stereo shaping, limiting and perhaps a little compressing could do the trick).
Lastly the 808 could use some work on it, too. I'd personally use a sample with longer decay, saturate it and put just a little of stereo shaping on it. Also making sure that kick sits on the 808 well is a fundamental.