Toribash
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starting out on FL Studio...
hey yall, i started making music on fl and its some lo-fi type of thing, i want some opinions on how i can improve.
https://soundcloud.com/wickedwitchof...d-old-6-string
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i see, the song you linked was kind of weird tbf but its a nice concept.
For reference ive been playing the piano for the past 8 years or so, i think i fail when it comes to combining piano with other instruments but yeah, always improving.ty for feedback
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https://soundcloud.com/wickedwitchof...siah-type-beat

going through a bit of a rough time right now, i might slow down on making these beats
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are samples even good to use? i see a lot of mixed reviews on them
Last edited by lily; Oct 31, 2019 at 08:26 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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im glad that a lot of you listened to my songs i posted, still kind of looking for advice (how do i even use automation??)
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Your mixing is a little off, your Melody feels too repetitive as it's only a two bar loop. Try going for 4-8 bars if you're making your own loops, and make sure you mix your drums well! If you need help just dm me on discord. #Dad7798
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Originally Posted by lily View Post
https://soundcloud.com/wickedwitchof...boys-type-beat
made this, looking for criticism

Cool concept, but I feel like the equalization on the synths and drums is a little off, also the drums feel like they could use a little of sidechaining and more head space. Also the panning of the snares feels a little too much, try making the snares hit a little closer to each other.
Lower the volume of the synths a little bit, make sure they don't blend together (equalization, stereo shaping, limiting and perhaps a little compressing could do the trick).
Lastly the 808 could use some work on it, too. I'd personally use a sample with longer decay, saturate it and put just a little of stereo shaping on it. Also making sure that kick sits on the 808 well is a fundamental.
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question on hi hat patterns: would it be good to place hi hats so that rolls fall before 808s kick in and then a shorter roll a bit after?
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Originally Posted by lily View Post
question on hi hat patterns: would it be good to place hi hats so that rolls fall before 808s kick in and then a shorter roll a bit after?


I usually put hihat rolls before snare hits or right after it hits. But I reckon it should work too, depends on how it sounds with the other drums.
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I'm back on that bull like the cowboy
[Zero] [Parrot] [NOT] [TANG]
akina | oaky | haku | max | suka | static