Kersh.
I really liked the softeness of the starter. I think it would have look better if you jumped further or/and higher. The punch was very weak, this due to you only having one foot on the ground and not being able to spin because of that. After that your chest snapped back and forth which look pretty bad. I liked the kick and the way you forced Nearlys face down to your knee with the arm. The "punch" to the back of Nearlys head was to weak aswell. After that you leaned back and did a very odd transition into the pose. Try to stay on your feet and move more realisticly.
Over all a pretty nice replay.
Here's a self spar I made today. I need some long CnC this time.