Toribash
Kersh.
I really liked the softeness of the starter. I think it would have look better if you jumped further or/and higher. The punch was very weak, this due to you only having one foot on the ground and not being able to spin because of that. After that your chest snapped back and forth which look pretty bad. I liked the kick and the way you forced Nearlys face down to your knee with the arm. The "punch" to the back of Nearlys head was to weak aswell. After that you leaned back and did a very odd transition into the pose. Try to stay on your feet and move more realisticly.
Over all a pretty nice replay.
Here's a self spar I made today. I need some long CnC this time.
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Originally Posted by Krophet View Post
Sorry Jisse, there won't be any CnC from me, becouse, i liked your spar very much..well, im gonna make my self-spar now, and i hope that you will CnC it..your replay 9/10.. great.

Please state what you liked specifically and why you liked it.
There's no excuse to not giving any CnC.
Also, you need a replay.
Please guys, give CnC x_x
Always read the first post of the f*cking threads you're about to post in.
Also atleast in my oppinion the CnC I gave is like the minimum. If you can't give proper CnC don't post here.
Originally Posted by biggems View Post
CnC for jisse- I really liked it looked very well thought out. 9/10 -what i liked most about your replay was the near miss kick that was really cool-

Please Biggems, that is NOT proper CnC.
If you can't CnC properly post in the replay sharing thread instead.
One week without posts? Damn.

The running at the beginning was decent, no problems about that one. But the first hit you did to uke was... unpleasant to look at, it was messy and it looked like a reverse belly flop to the face. The fighting part after the first hits was rather unrealistic, at least you managed to balance right. The elbow to the face after those stuff was not as solid as you made your tori act, it looked more like uke accidentally brushed his elbow to your tori. The punching at the end was a good idea but the execution was awful, you should contract the elbows a little earlier, like the one you did at the first punch and probably a little closer too.
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!VSMonchoRuinspar.rpl (1,005.4 KB, 13 views)
What? you didn't ruin anything in that spar. The replay is named after the mod used: tr_sparing_ruins.tbm
Last edited by Spry; Sep 23, 2012 at 09:09 AM.
*sigh*
Moncho...
Give CnC to the person above you if you want to post a replay at all.
It's not difficult...
Even if you're in the spar, that's no excuse.
Give CnC to the other person's ability.
A little self spar that i made :3

Rawb vs Bawbb.rpl

Oh! i forgot CnC.

!VSMonchoRuinspar

The spar seemed kinda sloppy at first, but you seemed to had cleaned that up later in the spar. The only other thing i didn't like was how you threw the ball, looked like you just flicked it back to him or something...

Sic Spar,

I like this spar, it has some nice style and flow to it. In my opinion, there was some parts were it was a bit unrealistic, had quite a few twitches, and you didn't seem to follow through with a couple of kicks.

(Is not good at giving CnC)
Last edited by Dobby; Sep 26, 2012 at 11:50 PM.