Toribash
loved your opener, im a sucker for openers that start slow then suddenly burst in speed. spin was sexy and the grab -> kick follow-up looked real smooth while maintaining your flow, thought i feel like you could have done a more damaging hit from the kick, but idk haha. not a fan of the second pick-up kick though, looked kinda awkward with all the weird wobbling and hesitation(?) from frames 296 to 283. last kick was straightforward i guess, it did its job and that's it. your right arm hanging in front of your head during the third kick was also pretty weird, could have avoided it with a few adjustments. the follow-through after the kick was aight, you overextended your leg which made it seem pretty stiff.

good stuff, great movement from the first half of the replay.
yeah ok
opener is slow but good launch to gain speed for boom
first boom is really good then i dont like that u slowed down after that
the grab to the knees couldve been better and more creative like bring his legs without grabbing and like juggling mid air or smth
that would definetly give it the wow factor
nothing special about this
good booms
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