Toribash
I agree with fudgie I like the first version more just cause the kick looks more stylish to me. Also I actually liked the spastic relax all moment.
I like your slow, held stances you soemtimes do before speeding up, it is a nice dynamic detail if that makes sense, most replays have a constant speed.

Anyway welcome back, it is good to have more people around.
oh yeah
im pretty good how about yourself

i dont really have any comments for this one, good replay
the only thing i could say was the that pecs kick didnt have a big OOMFPH
alright guy
all's well—you should talk more on discord

considering merging this thread with my old one to maintain contuinity or whatever
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yeah ok
please merge it.

also this replay was just insane, your kicks were going through uke like it was nothing.
i wish i can dm this good.
also what were you trying to do before the pose? you did some weird shit and i didn't like it at all.
all in all, solid as always, dms insane.
9/10
yo this shit is sick

THE GOOD
- cool spin opener + kneecapped
- 3 cool dms in quick succession (the ass destruction was sweet af)
- ricochet skeet roll thing
- basically the entire replay

THE BAD
n.b. this is big nitpick
- in opener: extending right knee + extend neck + face and elbow slap, doesnt flow very well
- elbow dm looks more accidental than intentional
- chest dm gotten with the joint instead of foot rectanglo
- shoulder movement from frames 280 - 240 is kinda iffy, though i understand it was necesarry so this doesnt really count
- haphazardly posing, relax all would have been preferable

VERDICT
9/10
alright guy
not a fan of the momentum switching in the opener

u twitched the right shoulder at 310

hip dms were shin

everything else perfect

cool foot skeet
alright guy