aight, i'll and dissect the first replay because i prefer it over the 2nd replay
the opener i genuinely liked, especially how fast you go into the spin after the ground kick it just looked very fucking cool, the only takeaway from this part is that you kept your head relaxed through the whole sequence of it, it might just be a personal gripe, but the way your head flails around because of the momentum just looks so uncanny, it bothers me so much my guy

the punch is fairly clean i'll give you that, but you obviously hesitated trying to grab uke after it hence the sudden raising motion at 346ish, and the posture you left after getting the kick in just feels odd, should've fully commited to the counter rotate after the grab, it might aswell even help you garner more juice for the kick, maybe even annihilate his whole torso with it bro (probably a stretch but i can definitely see you getting more dismemberments if you gained more momentum there)

i know this is your first time actually getting into ukebashing, one of the most common rule in ukebashing is that you should never even adjust any of uke's joint in the slightest, especially if its meant to ease you into doing a sequence, its a just a big no no, but i get that you might be experimenting with things and i'm all for that, but once you've gotten the jist of everything, refrain from doing these again okay <3

and again, the kick at 215ish feels so out of place because you're body is rotated towards the trajectory of the kick, when in this case, counter rotating would give your kick that OOMPH you know? here it just feels weak because of where you're facing towards

the setup to the last kick was rad though, then again, you did slow down a bit once you were getting into the kick, and you weren't able to fully extend onto the targeted joints, making the kick feel clunky, when in reality a 3 dm out a kick like that shouldn't be visualized being this weak

overall, you're getting the hang of it, give it a month of trying shit out, and you might just be the next great thing mano, keep it up!

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lost

fun collab thingy with millie

beeg

so majestic as always Mack

its been a while, collab with the one <3
original ending

cool :3


i rly like the last hit and the uke spinny from 500 to 400 ish