Toribash
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That's pretty nice, but there are a few things that could be better:
- The blades on the single sabers are way too long.
- All the blades could use a brighter "core", to make them appear more beamy. Like, nearly-white bright.
- They also need glow, which can be made with a checkerboard pattern of the sabers color on the edge of the blades. Right now they look more like colored plastic rods.
- The hilts could use some shading.

Here's what i'm talking about with the blades:



You've made something like the one on the left, and i'm suggesting that you should make it more like the one on the right. I've probably overdone the glow, but ehh... You get the idea.

And for the hilts...



Just a bit of shading, to give them some depth. In this example, it doesn't make a huge difference, but it will make a notable difference on yours, believe me. Keep in mind, the hilts are generally more or less cylindrical in shape, and should be shaded as such. If you want, i can give you a quick tutorial on it.

Otherwise, it's all good. (b'_')b
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Ye, they really need to glow, they kind of just look like dyed swords right now, pretty nice though.


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