Hello everybody, this is going to be my permanent replay thread, in which i will post replays that you can rate comment on and possibly even improve if you would like. Please refrain from posting your own replays here, i don't want your replays here unless they are edits of mine.

This thread is to help me improve my replays with comments from you guys. If you have the time to watch the replay, you have time to post, even if it's just a "Nice work". I want all the feedback i can get.

I've also cleared my replay folder, shifting them all to a new folder so all the ones i save now will be recent.

Here i will start with my first two, and i'll get to work on more :]

1st: pretty slow, but i know it should be like that because in the title says "beautiful" and you make it slow to fit the title, also is not an easy split from that side, but it needs more.

7/10

2nd: pretty relaxed, again, needs more, and i didn't really like the decap ;|

6/10

overall: you need more power 7/10

Sorry, nathan, but, i have to disagree with you, first one would be better if it was a split-cap or at least do a little bit more dismemberments

Cheers guys. You guys can try improve it if you would like? I'm fine with it. I hope you can make it better.

Here's a new one, it's faster, and stronger.

Now, that was actually a good kick, yeah, you could be more relaxed at the start, but i was wanting to see something like this from you

7/10

Thank you Gugu \o/

I hope you call by here often, it really helps my confidence :D

Marco, FIFTY, Gugu, everybody in this thread, i owe you heaps of thanks for your comments. It's only page two and i feel you guys are helping heaps. Right now i'm going to try and improve that replay.

EDIT:I almost forgot, i made this kick earlier today. Alot better, if i do say so myself.

Marco, you're a replay moderator? No wonder you keep stopping by :]

Thanks again guys. Here is the start of a manipulation, i just can't seem to do anything with it at this point :V

Permission granted, Marco. I would love to see more, hopefully i can get some ideas and make an edit of my own. Also, Alan, thanks for the advice. I realize that e is for edit, and i will try relax for you. Sounds dirty, no? ;]

Update time. I made a Manipulation Madman :D