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Typo, Grammar hunt. 10k TC / finding (English, French, German, Italian, Spanish)
Hi,

I think I found most of the typos and grammatical errors in TB Wii.

10k for each translation you find with a typo or error in it.

Rules:
1. Do not use a translating machine (google translate, babbelfish)
2. Native speakers only
3. 10k will be awarded for a full fix of a translated sentence/word with a typo
4. If a translation contains multiple errors only 10k will be awarded
5. Be meticulous
6. Be accurate
7. I will update the main post with findings so you don't report them twice

Here are the files in two different formats:
http://www.toribash.com/misc/efigs_strings.ods - Open Office
http://www.toribash.com/misc/efigs_strings.xls - Microsoft Office

Report errors like this:
Keyword: CUSTOMIZATION
Language: UK-English
current translation: Customization
problem: misspelling
correct translation: Customisation

Grammar nazis are more than welcome to join.

Good luck!

[EDIT]
TC sent to
- Moggomatix
- Aikanaro
- Sipher
- gerFight
- Waschbaer
- caelguinn
- carl
- kryo
- blam
- Giantz
- ofUnknown
- toril
- slash13
- fyerrblad
- vins84
- alan
- jacob
- dave
- deady
Last edited by hampa; Mar 4, 2010 at 11:03 AM.
Keyword: MENUTXT67 line 328
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: fasica di velocità
problem: wrong words
correct translation : misuratore di velocità

Keyword:TUT_KICK1 line 486
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: il segrato di un buon calcio sta tutto nelle coscie
problem: misspelling
correct translation : il *segreto di un buon calcio sta tutto nelle coscie

Keyword: TUT_JOINT_SEL5 line 443
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: bne fatto
problem: misspelling
correct translation : *ben fatto

Keyword: LANGUAGE line 17
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: idioma
problem: translation
correct translation : lingua

keyword: TUT_CAMERA3 line 432
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: zoomate
problem: forgot a word
correct translation : *zoommate

Keyword: HAIR_PONITAIL line 516
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: cavalo
problem: forgot a word
correct translation : *coda di cavallo

Keyword: GRIP line 29
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: agguantare
problem:translation
correct translation : prendere
Last edited by Toril; Jan 21, 2010 at 05:03 PM.
Keyword: EC_ERR5 (line 535)
Language: USA-English
current translation: This is not currently available for download.
problem: incorrect grammar
correct translation: This is currently not available for download.

Keyword: TUT_JOINT_CHNG12 (line 459)
Language: USA-English
current translation: good job! that's how you control the joints the art of fighting lies in joint rotation
problem: incorrect grammar
correct translation: Good job! That's how you control your joints. The art of fighting lies in joint rotation.
Last edited by Giantz; Jan 21, 2010 at 09:30 PM.
hi
Key word: tut_decap 3

USA English: Line 482 tut_decap 3 You've caught.. a head!

problem: incorrect grammar/typo

USA English: Line 482 tut_decap 3 You've caught... a head!
Last edited by sirkill1; Jan 22, 2010 at 02:07 AM.
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Keyword: WII_NUMBER
Language: US-French
Current translation: ami Wii
Problem: "ami" is friend
Correct translation: code Wii

Keyword: ROTATER
Language: US-French
Current translation: rotation droite
Problem: "à" missing
Correct translation: rotation à droite

Keyword: ROTATEL
Language: US-French
Current translation: rotation gauche
Problem: "à" missing
Correct translation: rotation à gauche

Keyword: BELT_BLUE
Language: US-French
Current translation: ceinture bleue
Problem: bleu(e)
Correct translation: ceinture bleu

Keyword: BELT_BLACK
Language: US-French
Current translation: ceinture noire
Problem: noir(e)
Correct translation: ceinture noir

Keyword: REPLAYR0
Language: US-French
Current translation: Plus de place pour les rediffusions
Problem: It's a negative sentence not affirmative.
Correct translation: Rien de place pour les rediffusions

Keyword: MENUTXT21
Language: US-French
Current translation: jouer avec les ami
Problem: Plural.
Correct translation: jouer avec les amis
Originally Posted by vins84 View Post
All these translation are corrects (I mean, originals one)
"ceinture" is feminine, so "noire" and "bleue" get an "e" at then end.

"Rien de place" means absolutely nothing. (I guess he isn't French)
Plus de place is right.

PS : I'm French
PPS : I'm going to edit my 2nd post now.

So I got a new one:

Keyword: BELT_BROWN
Language: US-French
Current translation: ceinture marron
Problem: marron(ne)
Correct translation: ceinture marronne

Right?

Btw, I'm portuguese
Keyword: INIT
language: EU-Spanish
Current translation: "inicializando"
Problem: the word is understandable, but that word isnt used often.
Correct translation: Iniciando

Keyword: WAITING...
language: EU-Spanish
Current translation: "espera..."
Problem: conjugation (gerund) ("ing" in english is = to "ando/endo" in spanish)
Correct translation: esperando...

Keyword: ABOUT
language: EU-Spanish
Current translation: "sobre"
Problem: is undertsndable, but it has a better translation.
Correct translation: acerca de

Keyword: ABS
language: EU-Spanish
Current translation: "abs"
Problem: is understandable, but there is a translation if it is needed.
Correct translation: Abdominales

Keyword: GOOD
language: EU-Spanish
Current translation: "buena"
Problem: i found this word in the chat section, if u mean good game, the tranlsation is worng (buen juego = good game).
Correct translation: buen

Keyword: YOU
language: EU-Spanish
Current translation: "usted"
Problem: "usted" is a word to formal for this game.
Correct translation: tu

Keyword: ĦBuen Trabajo! Hint: el salto ayuda a ejecutar impresionantes patadas
language: EU-Spanish
Current translation: "Hint"
Problem: it isnt translated.
Correct translation: Consejo

Keyword: SCRIPT_MSG6 (push)
language: EU-Spanish
Current translation: "emuje"
Problem: bad conjugation.
Correct translation: empujar

well, these are all the ones I found, maybe i found more later >.>
Last edited by Jakob; Jan 22, 2010 at 10:22 PM.
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Keyword: CHAT2
Language: US-French
Current translation: moi
Problem: "me" isn't a pronoun so "moi" cant be the translation.
Correct translation: je

Keyword: CHAT3
Language: US-French
Current translation: toi
Problem: "you" isn't a pronoun so "toi" cant be the translation.
Correct translation: tu

Keyword: CHAT21
Language: US/EU-Spanish
Current translation: haha
Problem: They say "jaja".
Correct translation: jaja
Originally Posted by CazRules View Post
On line 421 Wii is shown as W||... is it meant to do that?

Our Toribash font only has CAPS but to protect the trademark of the console we have to say "Wii" with lower case letters.

In our font | is changed to i.

This happens on a couple of places and can safely be ignore
The \\\\a \\\\+ \\\\1 \\\\b etc are changed to icons.

The text:
\\\\bbegin

Is shown in-game as:
(B-Button Image)begin