Here it is,And please tell me things I need to work on.Such as fluency,or making it faster or something like that if you don't find anything wrong just rate.Please rate from 1-10!

Slow and stiff. But because of the boomhits at the end, 5.5/10

I know it was slow.But stiff?through that whole replay the only joints that weren't relaxed were the ones that were doing something(like contracting and stuff like that)