C&C.

very nice, especially the 2nd spar, although a bit slow in places

Theres music, are your speakers on? because everyone else hears it.

Here comes the critics!
*-Needs special effects,especially when changing replay to replay.
*-If it had a lower beat,it would be perfect,but still,the video needs speed.
*-You shouldn't have made that pause in the start. It's kind of lame.
*-The music temp in sparring video's shouldn't be fast.
*-I didn't like the rusty combination of the music,it beats my head off.
*+/-Needs more atmosphere scripts(that's just my opinion)
*+/-I don't see any credits
*+Your getting better at video making.
10-4=6.
So you get a 6/10.
Try to be more smooth. For example,see Marco's videos.
Wars.wmr is the video you need to watch for sure.
Oh... here's another tip from me-
When you film the replays,try keeping the same speed,and film only on one place,like you film a bit left,don't stop going left. Cause making those fast movements from left to right looks a bit shitty (again my opinion).
P.S.
I'm in the 1st and 4th replay.

Thanks guys =)
I still need more comments, I want my next video to be perfect.

pm me when you're going to do your next video.

Ok, itll probably be another one this month

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He asked for the 4th replay.
Me and tiffany were there.
Its called Melmoths Atmosphere scripts.