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[VID] Bass

C&C please. I've got to get better, you know. ;o
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Originally Posted by TheCobra View Post
9/10

i am fascinated by YOUR art!
do some more of this!

I will. Thanks.
Originally Posted by Zalmoxis View Post
Overall it's a pretty awesome video. I think you had your best camerawork in the 2nd half of the video because in the first half you kind of overused the close-ups and missed a part of the action in some replays.

The effects, sync and transitions were also nicely done. Another thing that would be nice to improve is the outro.

Yeah, I wasn't sure what to do with the outro. I was on a limit to make it in one day anyway. I have testing today through thursday.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Originally Posted by Ruyzan View Post
Replays are gold but the cam is to shaky.

I liked the cam in this video aside from it missing abit of the replays. :<
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Originally Posted by Gorman View Post


Only thing that was dodgey was the slowmotion, the frames started to chug and just look like slow framerate. Don't know how you can counter-act that (maybe adding some vector blur (if your video package supports it) should do it).

Great job man ^^

The replay where the guy throws his wrists at the head that rolls away and the one at the end with the gyro are pretty awesome. Was fun to watch.

Yeah, I recorded at 30 fps to get the replays the speed I wanted them, but one of my comments says to record at 300 fps, and use adobe after effects--which I don't have--, because in sony vegas, there is a limit to how much you can speed up things. (Usually when I record 60 fps). It depends on if I want a fast-paced video, or a slower one.
Originally Posted by Arturix3 View Post
*cought* I think she's a girl *cought*

Anyways, about the vid... It's pretty great: there's some good sync, camera work. Loved the awsum effects and replays.
The only thing that I sorta didn't like is the part at 2:36 when the black screen appears for a while. That confused me a bit(was watching on my phone, thought that there was some sort of a lag)
9/10
I'm looking forward to see more of your works.

Like I said I was limited on my time, so I finished this just in time, I was going to make some sort of white flash to make sync with the black screen, I tend to make it a lot now.
I'll try and avoid it.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

its good but not great. Sync wasnt that bad but could have been better. Replays were ok but also could have been better. Music choice sucked. I had to mute the video in order to watch the whole thing. The repetitiveness of the song is just too much. I give it a 6/10 ;]

Also, I have a huge music library so if you need some good* music pm me lol
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I thought the sync was just fine, especially during the black\blinking parts. Also stated before I used replays that were posted. The music was just chosen quickly, I thought that about the music as I was making it.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Glad you liked it!
Though I'd like it more if I got criticizm.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Originally Posted by Kyou View Post
Yeah, I recorded at 30 fps to get the replays the speed I wanted them, but one of my comments says to record at 300 fps, and use adobe after effects--which I don't have--, because in sony vegas, there is a limit to how much you can speed up things. (Usually when I record 60 fps). It depends on if I want a fast-paced video, or a slower one.

Also I thought that when I use custom shaders with no reflections, it looks better imo. I'll use reflections next time.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up