Toribash
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[ArT] Kristis133 Avatar WIP
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4-(name)

5-(torso)

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8-(No more grey outlines)

9- (Arm)

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C&C please.
WIP > Work in progress. (Not finished)
Last edited by Leonardo; Jun 15, 2011 at 02:37 PM. Reason: WIPS
Originally Posted by BenDover View Post
Right shoulder joint needs work
and right side of the torso
it proportions and shaping there are messed
the tori's right, not yours

Thanks Ben.
I'll fix this things.
And I dont understand the tori's right thing.

Originally Posted by Lemon View Post
Looking sexy bro, I can't wait to see more.

kris is lucky for getting a avvy from you.

10/10

Thanks man.
Originally Posted by Kristis133 View Post
Oh yeah.


Oh and Leo.
I've just noticed that my name is a little bit hard to read because of dark colors. I think you should make the letters a lil bit bigger. Or try to change colors if you think that it would do the trick.

Kris, I'll change the outline colour.
And I'll post here.
Originally Posted by TengoMan View Post
Like this , though the proportions are still wrong, but you can figure it out.

Nice Tengo.
Thanks.
I fix the torso and the name
It's not bad actually.
It's pretty cute,
I can't understand why kristis isn't using it,
and where is the head?
I like it :3
7/10