Toribash
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Tama's road to ORMO (again(Boop Boop :D))
Hey there. Got some madmans for ya. Working on my skeets n' such. First replay for the thread is beeeeloooww.

AS YOU GIVE ME CNC, THINK ABOUT HOW YOU CAN HELP ME INSTEAD OF SIMPLY POSTING YOUR NEGATIVE OPINION ABOUT THE REPLAY(S).

TAGS DARP.

SS -Self Spar
M - Madman
T - Tricking
R - Random
WIP - .... Should be obvious.
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!Tamakuu- M- Spectacular Noob.rpl (231.1 KB, 91 views)
Last edited by Marrez; Mar 2, 2012 at 11:09 PM.
beware
the goblin
Well it was my first skeet, whadya expect? I'll be trying harder. And sadly, grabbing is the only way I can get good booms at the moment. I'm practicing, but that was just a replay I felt like posting. So, meh.

I guess I can thank you for CnC'ing, even though it really didn't help much.

P.S.

Check it :|.

Been editing this for a while. Kinda like the result, except for the pose.
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!Tamakuu- M- Drunken Pump.rpl (176.5 KB, 71 views)
Last edited by Marrez; Mar 2, 2012 at 11:21 PM.
beware
the goblin
Ahhh, thanks man. I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for the advice, I'll try anything I can to break the groin. And if I can't, I'll work on a final kick.
beware
the goblin
Don't see where all that fuzzle comes from :/ Sorry bro but it looks too mainstream to me.
Sure the booms were great but I feel like I've seen that replay a million times before.
The opener was really strange and wierd.
The first kick was really good, it was the best part of the replay.
The crotch kick could have had a bit more dms if timed correctly.
The pose could have been MUCH better. I don't like those laying down poses much.

7/10
oh yeah
(It's funny how you're all CnC'ing on Drunken pump and haven't CnC'ed Spec Noob.)

Anyway, thanks pusga. I see now that I have to mix Booms with originality.
beware
the goblin
Oh lol forgot about that other replay xD
Editing this post with CnC.
But yeah, I'd rather have a really original and crazy replay than one with some huge booms but that has been done before, that's why I try to make my replays always different.

Spec Noob: I liked the opener, and I really loved how you used your leg to help the other leg kick by lifting Uke.
The kick was pretty sweet, I like kicks that hit from the side.
The next kick was good, but if you hit a sweeter spot maybe you can get both arms.
The skeet was kinda useless, but not bad.

7.5/10
Last edited by pusga; Mar 4, 2012 at 09:33 PM.
oh yeah
Makes sense actually. I was just so shocked that I got booms on that replay that I focused on it a bit more.

And thanks. Working on that second kick right now. And the skeet was just practice. Eventually, I'll be making head skeets are DM skeets (hopefully).
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I'm starting to doubt my chances of getting into ORMO :/.
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Last edited by Marrez; Mar 6, 2012 at 08:50 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
beware
the goblin
The opener was a bit uninspired, but it's better than most of the ones that look like that.
I liked the spin and the split, they looked very good.
The punch was also really good.
The kick was seriously cool but you shouldn't have contracted the knee right away.
The next kick was very nice, but the last one was kinda pointless.
The pose was amazing.
8.5/10
Seriously loved that replay mate, it's the best I've seen from you.
oh yeah