Toribash
Pretty much.

Glad to see how D3m0nz is taking the lead for a moment xD.

Well, anyway. Up for a spar-a-mundo today.... In a few hours. For now, I'm gunna play black ops and eat like a fat person.
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the goblin
I know right.

And Nervoso, you didn't have to repost. You could've edited the app, and made a post with more than 1 word saying "Sorry about that. Edited the previous post". This is your first warning considering that I'm accepting you.

I can only slightly understand you sometimes. But even so, you seem to have a bit more experience and potential than most newcomers that come by here. Probably cause you're from 2008, that oldschool experience, y'know? All your style needs is a little tweaking. Study other's styles and learn from them.

Welcome to RSO.

Also, yes Noro, that cat does look high. Haha.
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the goblin
Oh, hi there.
Three spars from today.

Now, I'm off to a close friend's funeral for the rest of the night. Good bye guys. :"C
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Originally Posted by Gotkicks2 View Post
Please be merciless in Criticizing it. ^^ Thank you in advance

Rawr.
I'll CnC each sparrer as an individual.
Gotkicks2 - The beginning run started out very strangely. The first step you took, you extended your knee fully, and you also extended both your elbows. This made you look both stiff and gave you a little twitch. I thought you were going to punch him, but sadly, you did a very stiff grapple and clanged on to him. This resulted in a very messy and confusing moment. Your legs were stiff at times, and you did a back hand punch which isn't realistic, it also looked quite stiff. You did a kick jump, but lost all of your flow. But, I do like the kick - punch combo you flowed into there. The landing to it was smooth as well, and then you threw in a nice clean kick. After that, the following movements were pretty smooth, and that followed through was pretty clean, but a little stiff. Your hand also ghosted through your leg. Try to avoid ghosting through body parts. This will relate to the realism of the spar. After the kick, you extend your right knee fully. This looked stiff, and it wasn't very necessary. The knock out looked quite realistic. An overall good job, but you need to work on keeping your flow steady, and your relaxation. Good work.

Deadlybash - At the start, your arms were stiff, but you moved through with very smooth movements. There's not much to explain about the messy jumble because most people should avoid grappled fights in spars unless they can make it look good. It's not likely though. I liked the series of continuous hits you've executed and how smoothly you've thrown them. Sometimes you were a little stiff in the legs. Again, the last hits were smooth and clean, and I like how you didn't lose balance on the last punch. The pose was good. You don't have much to work on except to look out for just a bit of stiffness, and you might also want to add a little more "flare" to your style. Nice job.
It's not freeform.

Redo the app, and do it correctly. That and you didn't show me any replays.
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the goblin
So, I was recently accepted into ORMO. You guys can stop complaining of how I'm not in it yet. :3

CAN YOU SENSE MY FRIKKING JOY? Thought so. :3