CnC:
You're spazzy with your moves. Try to slow down a little bit, but keep that momentum going.
Try to stay on your feet, keep your balance. Try to hold more, don't relax so much.


Spar with KittiKat.

Gotkicks2, we really need to start a tradition.
Anyway, I'm going to make this as nitpicky as possible.
Oh my god, you missed that first punch, what a noob.
You made that flip look so awkward! Ugh! Disgusting!
Lol, Thousand Years of Death.
Oh god, you ruined it with that kick!
Why must you squat like that! looks like a constipated old man!
Last kick was shit.
-9999999999/10
Loser.

Alaistier Moderated Message:

Please give helpful criticism next time.

What I mean by Hold is, take it in moderation.
Don't be so overly stiff. once your... anything is in the right position,
Hold it there. For example, I like to hold my elbows at about a right angle,
doesn't look so awkward that way. Contract, then on the frame after that,
hold. Same goes for relaxing, take it in moderation.

The movement was good.
I like the little turn around you did at about 770 frames,
Although the way that the spar turned out it seemed a bit awkward.
The kick could have been aimed better.
Didn't like the arm ghosting through your leg, though.
I'm sure that you could have put another step in there from that walk.
That would have been a cool kick, although his leg got in the way.
Okai turn around.
Twitchy pose, but that's okay in my eyes.
A selfspar wip coming soon.

@Hours there was too much dead time in this spar but the moves was sweets ^^

so yea let's see what you guys will say of this
this is a fatality ending spar there is only one move executed but for the fun ^^'

@HuskyDQ

I'll go about this by listing the things i liked and didn't like in the spar.

Things i liked:

- The launches at 830 and 630 were pretty passable
-... that's it

Things i didn't like:

- You lost your balance before the fighting even started
- You didn't stick any of your landings(Not moving most of the air time to land with two fully contracted legs doesn't as sticking the landing.)
- You didn't move for 100 frames starting from 590

You need to improve your balance and overall flow.


And then for my replay I upload a collab selfspar I did with DarkDranz.
My parts are 1800-1050, 830-790 and 620-0.
Please cnc DarkDranz too.

Whoa.

I gotta be honest, that spar was kick-ass. Can't really find anything wrong with it except for few of the kicks. But other than that, the spar was filled with so much planning and sync. It was just.. Outstanding! My favorite part is obviously the beginning, when you got hit in the head and fell down from it. The gentle twist back onto your stomach and back up was awesome, especially with that "Let's go again" hand gesture you did.

I'd like to see more spars like these <3. 9.8/10

Here's one of my crappy spars.

I've Edited the first post to make it more clear.

You're welcome.

@Alaistier
What i didnt like:
- that part at 1080 was a bit confusing...
- the light quick punch at 983 was not bad but the wannabe roll wasnt what i was waiting...
- the spin Swex did at 896 with the full leg extended and up wasnt that good looking (for me at least).
- when you got that punch at 568 you wanted to exagerate the fack that it was powerfull and you lost too much balance in it...
- 630 was a nice way to get a nice low kick + epic jump dodge but Swex failed it...
-it's a pure shame that it didnt end

what i liked:
-everythings i didnt mention ^^
i hope it's deep enough for you

@Tamaku you want more like this? there is no problem XD


now i would like some CnC and tips about how to use swords correctly for sparring
looking at the following replays will make you understand what i mean...
PS: download the mod too it will help you to see the "Learning Twinswords" one

yea but wasnt you supposed to give a proper CnC btw?