Alai, calm down a bit my friend. Let the members try to get back on track themselves. You're having this urge to correct that as soon as they make a mistake. I'm sure someone in the org truly understands the rules and will find something wrong and try to help the others get back on track. If they don't that's when they come to us.

I don't like how you didn't move Uke in the beginning.
It looked as if you didn't know what to do with him.
Overall flow was okay, you lost it at some points.
Overall movements were nice. You ghosted through body parts at some moments, and some movements looked a bit strange.
Overall hits were clean, some were stiff, though.
The ending was okay, but it felt like it went a bit too slow.
Overall replay, pretty good, but it does have some flaws.


Here's a spar with Deadlybash.

Omgomgomg.
WHYYOUNOCNC.
Do it now.

Read the first post husky.

You can't CnC shit in this thread unless you have a replay for them to CnC.

This is just a warning.

Overall flow was...meh.
You changed it up a lot, such as at frame 1450.
You had a good constant flow until you contracted your right knee and slowed your whole movement down.
Overall hits were okay.
You lost a lot of balance on some hits.
I also noticed that roll you did when you lost balance on a kick.
It was smooth, but, since you trampled over your head, it was pretty unrealistic.
You also ghosted through your leg, which also kills the realism in the roll.
I don't like how your glutes hit the floor during your kick, punch combo.
The "getting back up" moment was pretty nice, but your arms looked terribly stiff and it looked more like an arm raise then a get up.
Your pose was good.


I thought I posted this?
Oh well.

Imma try and CnC as best I can. Also, sorry for inactivity. Haven't been much attention to
the forums lately.
Your flow seemed pretty good overall, though your punches were slow, plus that K.O. looked
Meh. The first kick was fairly awkward, I don't think it's supposed to bend that far.
I like the little stumble you did when he hit you in chest. Pretty cool.

uploading a WiP of a selfspar, pretty proud that I got it at that quality, usually I'm crap
at them.

So looking at Uke alone, I have to say that his movement was somewhat awkward
Except for the kick. Your tori's first punch awkward, didn't look right.
That K.O. didn't look right either, though it was rather stylish had it been a kick to the FACE, not the arm. The K.O. was also too slow.

Uploaded other shitty half of my selfspar, I don't really like it but whatever.
I had made a shittier version before, so I decided to atleast make it less twitchy.
bugs the hell out of me that I can't do better.

You atleast know how to punch...
I do have to say though that you are pretty
stiff. remember that you don't have to hold everything.
Keep in mind also to not relax everything, either.
Try to keep a healthy balance.
Also, Don't try to do all your moves in one frame.
visualize what you're going to do. Some moves require you to
move in a direction that might not make sense at the time, but the next frame
or so, if modified, will help. Sorry if this is a bad explanation, I'm not good at it.

NearlyDead,
Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
Post a replay of your own.
Thank you.

I think he meant Nearly should have posted a replay when he gave C&C to Bomba.