Toribash
Originally Posted by keoni109 View Post
Meh, okay replay. First kick was weird because it didn't go anywhere after you kicked him (?). The bad thing is that you grabbed too much on this replay (?). You should try doing a manipulation. Would be good practice for breaking your reliance on grabbing. But, you still had great booms.


I can't do manipulations. I've attempted 15 times and... well, they've all failed horribly. Best I've gotten in a manip his a decap with an arm DM, that's about it.

And I only grabbed twice, what do you mean too much?

I expected some semi-harsh CnC, but... I just don't understand what you mean.
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the goblin
Right now, I'm just trying to get the hang of booms, but I appreciate you making keoni's CnC a little more clear to me.

But I still don't have the hang of booms at all. Once I get bigger booms with grabbing, I'll learn how to do it without grabbing. Unlike many of the other replay makers out there, I have no potential or talent. I have to start from the basics and slowly exceed.

I'll be uploading a tricking replay later.
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My opinion on the above posts




Now, onto your replay Tama :U
To be honest, that replay was badass
Like I said, the opener was a bit stiff, but the split was nice
The next boomhit was amazing, I loved the speed and how solid it was.
Plus, it was a pretty clean replay

Great job 8.4/10
oh yeah
Thank you pusga.

I new my replay wasn't as shitty as these guys made me feel like it was.

Anyway, tricking replay. I like this twist.
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!Tamakuu- T- A secret.rpl (247.7 KB, 35 views)
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The running was great, the only flaw I see is on the second step, your arms look stiff
The twist was really awesome, and the landing was perfect
It was a short replay though, I was have fapped if you had made it longer

9/10
oh yeah
Phew.

Gotta sweep the dust off before it's too late. Anyway, my first decent manip-ish thing ever *initiate clapping*
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!Tamakuu- M- First time.rpl (349.5 KB, 31 views)
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Nice opener, I liked the first part of the manip and the kick, they were awesome
The next part of the manip was really badass, and the kick just settled it
Perfect pose

Badass, 8.7/10
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Lopsin I didn't do it that way because it would look akward. Now if I could land it in a backflip formation where it wouldn't look twitchy like you had did it, I would've. Sadly, I couldn't. Eventually, I'll figure it out.

Also, thanks guys. I didn't really think it would count as a manip due to the bland opener, but I really appreciate it. Uploading a replay in a few. Just a few more adjustments.
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Thanks for repeatedly nagging me to make a pose without my arm Lopsin...

Here's the result, hope you guys like it.
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!Tamakuu- T- New secrets.rpl (269.2 KB, 34 views)
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I was joking man.

I wish more people would've done that for me. Anyway, thank you for the CnC. I'll wait for more before I upload a new one.
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