So yeah I just made my first montage ever and raelly need critics and all that good stuff! check it out:

yeah thing about that is I couldnt just cut the music so the drop came like 5 sec in, it would sound really bad so I had to stretch it out to make the music sound good. and somethin got wrong in the rendering process causing the video to not being as clear as it was in the preview. and I will take the camera thing in mind til the next one I make
do you have any clue in a scale of 10 where it is?