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[TEX] Beat Up! | Need help/unfinished

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Update no. 1 !



Okay, this is my most recent piece of shit. I've gotten some of it done, but it's definitely unfinished. I'll let you guys give me some ideas, but what I definitely need help on is:

-The hands. I'm trying to make bare hands, but I've NEVER done that before. I need a little help or a link to a tut on how to.

-The feet. I think I did an "okay" job on the feet, but they can definitely use some work.

CnC and advice go :u?
Last edited by Marrez; Jul 22, 2012 at 08:12 PM.
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Not sure about the blood or teeth parts, but I kind of agree with adding better shading.

Sadly, the only helpful thing I got out of that is that I need better shading (which I've always known I had to add yet I still have no clue how to till this day) and that I need more pizzazz to my other body parts.
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Updated! Added a bit more of shading and lightening and finally made hands of my own.
Last edited by Marrez; Jul 22, 2012 at 08:21 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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Thanks bob.

I'll get to it as soon as I can. Not sure if I want a nose though D:. Everything else sounds pretty nice though.
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I quite like it but...

How about adding a rip to the hat? He got beat up right, they would of been grabbing his hat!
He also needs pupils )
I'll thinkg about it xd.

I was going for the non-pupil style. Just the way my cartoons are. But a ripped hat sounds great (jeez, so many great ideas \o/)
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The blue eye seems a bit unrealistic, you should change that.
Don't see anything else to be added except better hands, can't help with those tho.
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If he takes the hat off and just tells the person when he sells it just to stick the hat on and it would look like this : INSERT PICTURE, it would be fine to sell. But since the hat is free I don't think you can sell it with the set, just give them a link to where they can put it on...
On the other note, it looks nice, just biceps are kind of weird idk if they are finished. and the hands defiantly need to be fixed up. But it looks pretty nice for a beat up guy
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I wasn't planning to sell the hat in fact I don't plan to sell this set anytime soon. I want you guys' help to help me improve in the set making business. What I make here will be used in set some other time.

So, tor1god, you really didn't help. At all. Thanks for nothing.

@Beta Yeah, the biceps will need more work. The bare bicep needs more visible scars and the bicep that goes with the force looks like it needs a more cloth-like appearance, something more sleeve-like.

Anything else? I've been getting some good ideas so far.
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Okay, it's not much, but this is what I've changed so far. It's only a head change.



Added:
-Throat
-Eyebrows
-Bruise on the left cheek
-A small bruise on the right side of the head (not visible in the pic :<)
-A cut on the left side of the head. (Also no visible Dx)
-Nose (probably not visible)
-Nosebleed (Also probably not visible)
Last edited by Marrez; Jul 24, 2012 at 06:41 AM.
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