Toribash
I'm disappointed that Gotkicks would suspect me of stealing.
Edit: Posting a different spar.
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Spar with Vsauce.rpl (350.5 KB, 8 views)
Last edited by Nearly; Jul 11, 2012 at 04:46 AM.
wow that
sucked
Well, that was maybe the worst attempt at CnC I could have ever witnessed.
I'm very sure NearlyDead did not want just flaws stated for his CnC, and that he'd like some tips on what he should improve on.
So, I will give him a shitload of CnC.


The opener flowed nicely, but I disliked how you landed on your left toes.
I also disliked how, for a second, you stopped then suddenly turned around.
You flowed the first kick in very nicely, but, try not to contract your knee on that type of kick.
You should keep it mostly extended so that you have other options to your next move.
Also, I prefer to have those types of kicks dodged instead of making contact because, if it does make contact, it's most likely that you'd have to reverse your flow and bring the leg back to the same position where it once was, the same way you did. The two punch combo was pretty good.
However, the first punch looked a bit too extended at first.
The second punch flowed in very nicely.
That 180 kick looked very smooth, but I feel that you extended a bit too early and that you're leg looked a bit stiff.
I also disliked how that kick took quite a lot of balance out of you.
I think you guys ended the spar way too early and that you should've continued.
Overall flow was pretty good, but there were some stops at some points.
Overall hits were very smooth.
Overall realism was great.

Now, Gotkicks2.
The hits were okay.
However, you barely moved your own tori around and allowed Uke to kick you around like a statue.
Also, each kick Uke threw was very awkwardly set up and and he looked like a moronic monkey.
The first kick you threw was pretty nice, but quite stiff.
The next kick wasn't very smooth, nor did it flow very nicely.
Also, you hit Uke's head with your shin, more than your foot, which isn't too realistic.


Also, I'd like to point out that there is no right or wrong way to kick.
A noob could simply hold all, contract his knee, and then extend it, and I'd classify that as a kick.
Same idea referring with punches.
You don't judge a kick by saying "don't do that."
Some kicks are very smooth and very stylish, but are set up the same way as a simple kick. So, when you say "don't do that" you're basically getting rid of their option to gain more knowledge on a new, stylish kick.
Only judge a kick by how smooth it looks, how stylish it looks, how well it flowed in with his movements, how well he flowed after the kick made contact/was dodged, and how stiff or not stiff it looked.

Here's a pretty nice double flash gainer combo.
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D3 - Double Flash Gainer.rpl (198.1 KB, 8 views)
Let me clearly state this.

If any of you do not even bother to thoroughly read your CnC, no matter short or long, you'll never get any better.
Rek, since you've just joined RSO, I won't get all raging-psychopath on you.

Please read the rules and give CnC to the person who has previously posted a replay when you want to post your own replay.
Just wait until someone has a replay that they'd want CnC on, they'll give you CnC.
Please be patient.

Also, Rek, you should've given CnC to, if I remember correctly, my replay.
The spar was mostly good and you had nice flow but here are few things I didn't like about it:

- You were aimlesly kicking the air quite a bit. Try to make sure your opponent is within your reach when you do a kick or it will look like pointless waste of energy.

- You lost that perfected balance around 750 :P

- The last hit looked cheap.

And then for my replay...
Here's a bit different spar from me and swexx.
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Well, obazu, I'm not sure what I can say. Staff spars are pretty hard to do, but I've seen better from you. I guess it was just the lasers I didn't like.

Some of the spins and twist to keep balance didn't look that good.
I've never done a good staff spar in my life, so I'm not sure what to say. Maybe someone else can comment on it...

Well, here's my replay. CnC on anything you can find wrong with it.
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!TamaKuu- S- Sync.rpl (432.0 KB, 11 views)
beware
the goblin
So, I'll try to CnC both then?
@Kershner2, you sorta had a sloppy start there. I'm not trying to be mean, but
perhaps practice on running? after that it was a sorta good recovery, the kicks were
meh. You then did a pretty good spin around, and had a great setup for a launch, but you
just sit there! It's okay to pause for a bit in a spar, but not for that long. After all that it
just looked meh.

@Butterz1 The spar you did was pretty good. I like the spins you did, though some of
them looked a bit awkward. You are sorta slow though, and I think you need to work
on your run a bit.


This spar is incomplete because someone named Lasttime decided to be a dick
and reset the match.
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Spar with Kershner.rpl (382.6 KB, 21 views)
wow that
sucked
Kershner's spar.
Your overall movements looked pretty good, but you lost balance a lot. You also kick off the ground using your toes. It's not quite realistic.
Your hits are okay, but some look stiff and unrealistic.
Your flow is quite smooth, but you completely stop it at points.
Sorry for the crappy CnC.


Here's two choices for my entry for the "Shoalin Showoff" Event.
Please tell me which one you find to be better, and then CnC that replay.
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D3 - Dragon Style.rpl (296.2 KB, 14 views)
D3 - Tiger Style.rpl (359.7 KB, 17 views)