Toribash
Academy: You extended your left hip too early at the start, and it affected the whole run.
I like the flip at the end though, it looked very nice.

Sleepless: The starting kick had no impact on Uke whatsoever, but the dms were awesome.
The chest kick flowed well, it was very cool.
The crotch combo was awesome, but you struggled to get up, or so it seems.
oh yeah
Originally Posted by chamara View Post
Academy:
While running, your pec timing is really important, try to use your glutes and pec to keep running straight. Using shoulders are mostly bad while running, because it makes you lose your balance. Try not using the chest too, looks kinda weird and unrealistic.
And while running, keep your ankles contracted to lean forward.
Hope I helped.

You did, quite a lot actually.
Thanks.

Originally Posted by pusga View Post
The crotch combo was awesome, but you struggled to get up, or so it seems.

I kinda did that on purpose.


Anyways, the following replays are as follows: an edit for Sleepless and a parkour replay. That was my first parkour replay so I would really like some criticism on that.

EDIT: Added the mod
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Well Rested.rpl (310.2 KB, 60 views)
Runner's High.rpl (273.5 KB, 53 views)
Academy-Lvl_5v2.tbm (1.3 KB, 40 views)
Last edited by Spry; Aug 10, 2012 at 02:03 PM.
Well rested: I liked the new skeet, it was a cool addition to the replay. Way better than the other one now that you fixed some things at the end.

Runner's High: I'm afraid I don't have the mod for that replay.
oh yeah
Thanks for putting in the mod.

Runner's high: I think your chest was not synced to your steps, but it's not that much of a big deal.
Right after you grabbed the bar you didn't move for a while, it broke the flow a bit.
I did however love what you did on the bar, how you gained momentum and propelled yourself with your legs from the bar.
Great handspring and roll, and you got up pretty quickly.
The jump to the wall was very nice.
Nobody will agree with me, but I loved when you used your leg on the wall to do some tricking at the end.
oh yeah
Also, an old rushed replay here.
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Bam.rpl (104.5 KB, 57 views)
Last edited by Spry; Oct 24, 2012 at 01:50 PM.
It's simple, but the boomhit was impressive, and I somehow liked the opener.
The pose didn't stand still, but I'm not gonna be picky about that.
oh yeah
I should stop posting incomplete replays. I finished the replay "Bam" but It feels like it is missing something

Also, A finisher-esque type of replay. It kinda sucks but I had fun making it.
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Bam.rpl (165.5 KB, 44 views)
Skin to Bone.rpl (582.9 KB, 55 views)