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The first hits looked way too stiff and slow, maybe you should try to get more momentum. That was probably because you started off attacking right at the beggining.
The head punch was alright, and so was the kick, but the leg was a bit twitchy because of how fast you contracted the knee after the kick.
Just wanted to point out that you almost didn't move any other joints of the body, in the meantime, and that made it really stiff.
You ghosted through your leg while turning around.
Liked the jump and headkick, even though the kick was rather slow.
The decap + knee flowed well, and it looked nice when Uke was trying to get up and you just came and destroyed him.
The first hits looked way too stiff and slow, maybe you should try to get more momentum. That was probably because you started off attacking right at the beggining.
The head punch was alright, and so was the kick, but the leg was a bit twitchy because of how fast you contracted the knee after the kick.
Just wanted to point out that you almost didn't move any other joints of the body, in the meantime, and that made it really stiff.
You ghosted through your leg while turning around.
Liked the jump and headkick, even though the kick was rather slow.
The decap + knee flowed well, and it looked nice when Uke was trying to get up and you just came and destroyed him.
oh yeah
here is new shit :/ its so weird i made it with about 6 hours D:<
The opening core was pretty decent, but I think it could still be done with less grab. The landing after that was quite odd, it looks like you were trying to balance on one leg. Your launch was pretty decent but while you were in mid air your upper body looked really stiff for some reason, it must be the way your arms were raised throughout the launch. The 4-dm boom after that was excellent and the following skeet was great too. The final kick was pretty good but I am pretty sure you could dm that leg too. The self damage is pretty unnecessary though.
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Trolling the life: The core was great, but I disliked how you had to use grab. I've done a double core without grab before, and the opener was exactly like that.
The transition to the kick was a bit stiff, but the boom itself was good.
The skeet was short range but still good. The crotch hits were alright, they flowed well.
Broken Mirrors: You were twitchy at the start, but the flip was great, aswell as the left leg you used for momentum.
I disliked how you ghosted through your leg at the end, and your legs were akward in the landing.
The transition to the kick was a bit stiff, but the boom itself was good.
The skeet was short range but still good. The crotch hits were alright, they flowed well.
Broken Mirrors: You were twitchy at the start, but the flip was great, aswell as the left leg you used for momentum.
I disliked how you ghosted through your leg at the end, and your legs were akward in the landing.
