The opener was pretty mediocre, since I've seen the same type of transition used a lot before.
During the mid-air sequence you twitched around quite a bit, and the grab kinda killed that mini-rotation you had going on there.
The boom was great, but the kick itself looked quite slow.
Transition to the next kick flowed in nicely.
The next kick was good, but it seemed a bit messy, and with a bit more aim (and ghosting :s), you could get a boom out of it.
Pose looked cool.
All in all, a nice replay, but you change the speed of your flow a bit too much. (i.e. the different speeds of your first and second kick)
You should also watch out for those twitchy moments and try to smooth them out a bit. (If possible)
New replay. I really like it, honestly.