In which case I'll get to voting.
I'm going to base my vote almost entirely on your replays.
Obliteration - While the booms were nice the replays lacked fluidity i think, the parts between hits seemed a wee bit stuff, try relaxing a few joints and having an idea of what you want to do before you do it.
TakedownV1 - The first hit looks like a judo starter and then there were the same problems as with the first replay I'm afraid.
Elaborate ElephantsV2 - Cool name by the way. I actually quite liked this one, the first hit was ok and then the 2nd kick reminded me a little of one of Juhizz's replays. Warrior's dance i think? In any case afterwards you could have tried a skeet or something, the pose wasn't great. Just work on styling that one a bit more, but it was better than your previous ones.
lol freerunning3 V2 - The first jump looked promising and then I'm afraid it went downhill from there. Your style uses to many held joints for it to look fluid enough for a parkour replay. Also you didn't actually manage to get anywhere, heh.
decapitation2 - The jump was quite nice, reminds me of some o my old work but then the decap wasn't great. While I appreciate it's supposed to be a controlled cap, I'm afraid it wasn't quite good enough to be the central attention point of the replay.
All in all I think you're a tad new to the game, and you need some more experience with it.
Please don't misunderstand me, i don't want to seem harsh or anything, I just think you need a bit more know how before applying, but please feel free to apply again.
Thanks for your time and stuff, sorry, but based on what i've said, it's a no from me.
I'm going to base my vote almost entirely on your replays.
Obliteration - While the booms were nice the replays lacked fluidity i think, the parts between hits seemed a wee bit stuff, try relaxing a few joints and having an idea of what you want to do before you do it.
TakedownV1 - The first hit looks like a judo starter and then there were the same problems as with the first replay I'm afraid.
Elaborate ElephantsV2 - Cool name by the way. I actually quite liked this one, the first hit was ok and then the 2nd kick reminded me a little of one of Juhizz's replays. Warrior's dance i think? In any case afterwards you could have tried a skeet or something, the pose wasn't great. Just work on styling that one a bit more, but it was better than your previous ones.
lol freerunning3 V2 - The first jump looked promising and then I'm afraid it went downhill from there. Your style uses to many held joints for it to look fluid enough for a parkour replay. Also you didn't actually manage to get anywhere, heh.
decapitation2 - The jump was quite nice, reminds me of some o my old work but then the decap wasn't great. While I appreciate it's supposed to be a controlled cap, I'm afraid it wasn't quite good enough to be the central attention point of the replay.
All in all I think you're a tad new to the game, and you need some more experience with it.
Please don't misunderstand me, i don't want to seem harsh or anything, I just think you need a bit more know how before applying, but please feel free to apply again.
Thanks for your time and stuff, sorry, but based on what i've said, it's a no from me.
She/They
Yeah, I only don't like erthtkv2 because of the mod's name. Make it "tkv2," and the mod will instantly become more popular. This is a valid reason as the name of the mod is still an important feature that no one seems to have yet discussed.
Yeah, I only don't like erthtkv2 because of the mod's name. Make it "tkv2," and the mod will instantly become more popular. This is a valid reason as the name of the mod is still an important feature that no one seems to have yet discussed.
You've not waited long enough.
Wait at least a month before re-applying after rejection.
Wait at least a month before re-applying after rejection.
She/They
Yeah, I only don't like erthtkv2 because of the mod's name. Make it "tkv2," and the mod will instantly become more popular. This is a valid reason as the name of the mod is still an important feature that no one seems to have yet discussed.
Yeah, I only don't like erthtkv2 because of the mod's name. Make it "tkv2," and the mod will instantly become more popular. This is a valid reason as the name of the mod is still an important feature that no one seems to have yet discussed.
I'm here to apply, I guess.
Age : 14 almost 15 (mature for my age).
Nationality : I'm swedish and 1/4 part french.
Belt : 3rd dan, I never really do anything but sparring, parkour and sometimes Taekkyon.
Preffered mods : Sparring, parkour and Taekkyon, obviously.
Old clans : [Hunters] and a few unofficial clans that died away very quickly. This was a time when I never was active in the forums and never really cared for anything but wushu.
Why do you want to join? : I want to join UrbanUnit because you are a very respected clan with good replay makers. I make replays from time to time as well. I guess I know Erth decently, and he's a nice guy.
What kind of skills can you bring to Urban? : Sparring, replay making and social skills. I have a lot of friends.
Other qualities? : I'm a really quick learner with good grades at school. I just started modmaking and got some pretty good CnC on my first mods. I've got very much spare time as well.
Draw a lemon. It wouldn't upload regularly, so I had to use this link.
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Please consider.
Age : 14 almost 15 (mature for my age).
Nationality : I'm swedish and 1/4 part french.
Belt : 3rd dan, I never really do anything but sparring, parkour and sometimes Taekkyon.
Preffered mods : Sparring, parkour and Taekkyon, obviously.
Old clans : [Hunters] and a few unofficial clans that died away very quickly. This was a time when I never was active in the forums and never really cared for anything but wushu.
Why do you want to join? : I want to join UrbanUnit because you are a very respected clan with good replay makers. I make replays from time to time as well. I guess I know Erth decently, and he's a nice guy.
What kind of skills can you bring to Urban? : Sparring, replay making and social skills. I have a lot of friends.
Other qualities? : I'm a really quick learner with good grades at school. I just started modmaking and got some pretty good CnC on my first mods. I've got very much spare time as well.
Draw a lemon. It wouldn't upload regularly, so I had to use this link.
[img=http://www.imageshack.us/thumbnail.png]
Please consider.
