Makes Sense: The decap itself looked pretty stylish. When you started dancing you broke the flow though.
The dancing looked great. The part where you stop before the helicopter was a bit strange though.
The helicopter and head spin were great, but I was expecting a pose.
Jmoze: Do you need tips or do you want me to edit the replay? If tips, I can already tell the way you grabbed the hand made everything harder. If you are going for a skeet like that, I'd suggest grabbing the tip of the hand. That way it makes it so when you swing your arm you gain more momentum, because it's as if you had a longer arm. If not, you can just turn around and skeet like in this edit.
EDIT: I made this replay but it looks extremely generic to me. Give me your thoughts.
The dancing looked great. The part where you stop before the helicopter was a bit strange though.
The helicopter and head spin were great, but I was expecting a pose.
Jmoze: Do you need tips or do you want me to edit the replay? If tips, I can already tell the way you grabbed the hand made everything harder. If you are going for a skeet like that, I'd suggest grabbing the tip of the hand. That way it makes it so when you swing your arm you gain more momentum, because it's as if you had a longer arm. If not, you can just turn around and skeet like in this edit.
EDIT: I made this replay but it looks extremely generic to me. Give me your thoughts.
Last edited by pusga; Oct 6, 2012 at 06:38 PM.
oh yeah
@Pusga
EighteenEighteen -
The opener was okay, but you had your right arm raised and extended for far too long.
It made you look quite stiff in general.
The first boom was nice, but got far too close to look powerful.
The transition to the next boom was excellent. It looked smooth and flashy.
However, it also looked quite stiff due to your arms and one of your legs being fully extended throughout the swing.
The standing on your arms thing was pretty random.
I think you should've just went straight back on your feet right after that boom.
Pose was okay.
All in all, a great replay.
@Jmoze
Trail of Tears -
The opener was pretty generic.
And I didn't like how you had your arms held the whole time, looked strange.
The punch was alright, it was nice and smooth with the decap.
Good job.
@17april
Miracle v.2 -
The opener was great. It was unique.
The first kick was nice.
You could've added another dm if you had your ankle extended and possibly ghost through Uke's torso.
I loved the quick grabbing sequence you had there. The grabs didn't kill your flow. (Except, maybe, that grab on the last kick)
The first boom looked nice, but you could've added another dm in there with some more aiming.
The next boom, same stuff as the first.
The torso dm was okay, disliked how the grab helped with the dm.
The last boom was pretty messy.
You could've had a much better result if you aimed that kick more.
The pose was derpy compared to the whole replay.
Still, great job.
Try doing some non-grab hits. :3
Also, @Pusga again, that skeetcap was okay, but it took too long to setup.
LOL MY TURN.
One of my infamous -50 grav replays.
EighteenEighteen -
The opener was okay, but you had your right arm raised and extended for far too long.
It made you look quite stiff in general.
The first boom was nice, but got far too close to look powerful.
The transition to the next boom was excellent. It looked smooth and flashy.
However, it also looked quite stiff due to your arms and one of your legs being fully extended throughout the swing.
The standing on your arms thing was pretty random.
I think you should've just went straight back on your feet right after that boom.
Pose was okay.
All in all, a great replay.
@Jmoze
Trail of Tears -
The opener was pretty generic.
And I didn't like how you had your arms held the whole time, looked strange.
The punch was alright, it was nice and smooth with the decap.
Good job.
@17april
Miracle v.2 -
The opener was great. It was unique.
The first kick was nice.
You could've added another dm if you had your ankle extended and possibly ghost through Uke's torso.
I loved the quick grabbing sequence you had there. The grabs didn't kill your flow. (Except, maybe, that grab on the last kick)
The first boom looked nice, but you could've added another dm in there with some more aiming.
The next boom, same stuff as the first.
The torso dm was okay, disliked how the grab helped with the dm.
The last boom was pretty messy.
You could've had a much better result if you aimed that kick more.
The pose was derpy compared to the whole replay.
Still, great job.
Try doing some non-grab hits. :3
Also, @Pusga again, that skeetcap was okay, but it took too long to setup.
LOL MY TURN.
One of my infamous -50 grav replays.
Wow...
First page messed up...
This new editing system has this new ability to mess up that. :P
Anyway Butler.
Could you finally update my things on first post. :P
First page messed up...
This new editing system has this new ability to mess up that. :P
Anyway Butler.
Could you finally update my things on first post. :P
fuck
| No, we don't. Write something here and I'll consider it.