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Another bad replay thread for patrickooo
Hi,
i'm improved from the last time i showed my replays, i trained soo much and i get into here.
So could you please CnC?
Starting with this replay.
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Pat ~ Clean.rpl (124.7 KB, 14 views)
Last edited by Patrickooo; Oct 27, 2012 at 11:49 AM.
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okay.
new replay.
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Pat ~ Extreme.rpl (117.7 KB, 14 views)
Last edited by Patrickooo; Oct 20, 2012 at 09:40 AM.
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That starter isn't yours. Not in a million years...
Plaigarism is a punishable offence so stop it. For your own good.

Everything after the crotch kick was jerky and floppy.
0/10
well that sucked, let's get back with another one (you see that i'm bad because i'm 11 years old you dicks!)
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Pat ~ that badass.rpl (102.5 KB, 8 views)
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sometimes: the first hit was ok, it's good that you're managing t get power behind your hits but it looks awkward and holdy. Try to relax some more joints. Then the 2nd hit wasn't great. Often in replays, holding the same grab for multiple hits doesn't work, try and only use grab when it's essential. Then the actual decap kick was extended waaaaay too early, you get a lot less power behind your hits if it's swinging through the air fully extended, keep it contracted or relaxed until the point where you can extend it to hit the sweet spot. Then at the end the dancing thingy looked a bit holdy too.
Also you could try and edit another kick in at the end, your hand falls on top of the body, it could be a good opportunity to practice booming.
She/They

Yeah, I only don't like erthtkv2 because of the mod's name. Make it "tkv2," and the mod will instantly become more popular. This is a valid reason as the name of the mod is still an important feature that no one seems to have yet discussed.
i tried like shit to do it better but it didn't work
so i got this
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Pat ~ destructing.rpl (134.4 KB, 6 views)
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Sometimes: Very fast hits and a mehish pose 7.5/10
A Little Bit: Very nice boomhits. Again, very fast. You have some potential. 8/10
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Destructing: The first kick was good. But the second kick(decap) was a bit lazy, and the transition to the hand throw looked EXTREMELY twitchy. Try and get some more flow, if you can.
Overall:7/10
Last edited by BloodMach; Oct 27, 2012 at 01:25 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump

Desperately trying to get back into TB...

let's get back ;) those are my best 2 replays
CnC would be appreciated..
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Pat ~ alphabet.rpl (120.9 KB, 6 views)
Pat ~ alphabeto.rpl (157.1 KB, 4 views)
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