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Jisse's replay thread d:)
Back into replay making, I suppose.
I'll be posting some of the replays I make here.


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Jisse - Dat Trick.rpl (191.5 KB, 991 views)
Last edited by jisse; Sep 29, 2014 at 06:08 PM.
Cool and stylish spins, but the direction shifting after the opener and the akward abs during the first landing was not that great
oh yeah
The first spin was great, Fast and stylish. The second one however looked a little slower, still looked good though. The landing weren't really good with the extended ankles and all but the pose was nice.
The opener was mediocre, normal running opener.
I disliked how you kept the same position while you were in midair a bit until you landed on your feet.
The first punch was executed pretty smoothly.
Sadly, you contracted one or two frames after the dm which didn't give that powerful look added into your punch.
It looked more like you tapped him, really.
The decap was cool.
You could've made a boom on that kick with more aim.
The skeet was pretty random and unnecessary since you didn't really have any flare put into it.
Looked bland and whatnot.
The flip after was okay.
Your pose looked nice, but it wasn't too stable after a hundred frames or so.
You should tweak that a bit so that you actually stay on your feet.
Alright, thanks.
I need more people like you to give me critisism instead of just "good replay 8/10"
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A pretty messy madman...
No really, it's MESSY!
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Jisse - Disgrace.rpl (560.1 KB, 223 views)
Last edited by jisse; Oct 24, 2012 at 03:21 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
You should make madmans more often. The splitcap at the beginning was alright, though the decap looked like the neck was twisted rather than kicked. The hits you did after those were so damn fluid, the wrist-elbow dm you did towards the end didn't flow as good as the rest of the replay. Though the skeet and the following dm made up for it.