YAY! Finished revising, can get back to toribash!
Alphabet:Well well well, it seems you're getting better. The first kick was alright, and the transition to the second kick was nothing special and the kik itself should've been more powerful. Next time wait a bit until you get the perfect target. The rest was mehish ripping Uke apart-woah! How did that hand get dismembered? Holy crap...back on topic...so overall it was alright. If consider it your best replay yet, that's alright. 8/10 Good.
Alphabeto: A bit twitchy at the start and I couldn't get what was happening.
The first kick was good, the boomhit was alright. and the crotch kick was very good. The pose was alright. Overall 8.5/10
Good replays so far.
Alphabet:Well well well, it seems you're getting better. The first kick was alright, and the transition to the second kick was nothing special and the kik itself should've been more powerful. Next time wait a bit until you get the perfect target. The rest was mehish ripping Uke apart-woah! How did that hand get dismembered? Holy crap...back on topic...so overall it was alright. If consider it your best replay yet, that's alright. 8/10 Good.
Alphabeto: A bit twitchy at the start and I couldn't get what was happening.
The first kick was good, the boomhit was alright. and the crotch kick was very good. The pose was alright. Overall 8.5/10
Good replays so far.
Desperately trying to get back into TB...
