Your intro is nice, and all effects are sync except the kick one who come too soon in comparaison by the music.
Anyway, not bad for a first try.
Now, you can do a real vid who do more than 11 seconds ;)
Video was perfect, only if it was longer.
Shortness of the length would have to make me rate a 9.5/10. I have to take .5 off because I was pissed that the good video ended so soon .