Toribash
So you want somebody to tell you what's wrong eh, I guess I'm pretty good at complaining about the slightest thing so here I go.

What's up with Uke's abs at the start? I feel like it would be a small thing to complain about but in this case, the first boomhit might have even depended entirely on it.
Cork looks great, but you didn't choose the best spot to grab, it looked wonky, probably because of how the force was applied. When I see someone grab, it always looks better if it looks like you are pulling Uke to yourself, not the opposite.
Super solid boomhit, plus some nice airflares and the decap which was the best part of the replay in my opinion.
Not really any flaws to point out from here on, the transition and the boomhit were close to flawless, but that's not necessarily a good thing, but I'm pretty darn sure that's just me.
I've been pretty sick, so I haven't been able to make any replays.
Here's my newest one. Parkour.
Attached Files
Jisse - Templar.rpl (712.4 KB, 88 views)
parkour_city_prt2.tbm (23.2 KB, 46 views)
That was great. The running is perfect and the jumps were well executed. I cannot really do a good Cnc since I don't do parkour replays that much. But it's safe to say that the parkour you did is really good.
* Some awesome shit...

Really cool replay, liked that you used your hand for every DM...

The last DM was the best for me; dat skeet.
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The way you did the kick at 810 was a bit lame, didn't have any momentum by the time your leg reached him.
The takedown was nice, but you kinda struggled to pose without falling.
oh yeah
I'm not quite fond of this spar. Though you did hit your opponent nicely, you're movements appeared rather awkward and slow. I do think you can do better than this one.
Well, I agree with y'all, I only spent about an hour on the replay though. I must say I'm getting faster though.
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New replay.
Attached Files
Jisse - Weightless.rpl (961.7 KB, 92 views)
parkour_city_prt2.tbm (23.2 KB, 43 views)
Last edited by jisse; Jan 2, 2013 at 09:02 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump