Toribash
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[TEX] Head dark orc
this is one of my earliest works, made fully manual, I had abandoned this sketch, more for some reason I decided to resume it, missing a lot of stuff like, hair, ears and some effects .
So, what do you guys think of this?
I'll post progress in accordance with my free time.

WIP 1


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I have made some improvements, I need all opinion so I can know where to focus.

WIP 2


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WIP 3


I tried to use some tips, I hope to be on track.
There is something I can change to make my work better?
(I am seeking inspiration to do hair, I still do not like the nose.)

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the end

wip final

Last edited by -Kau-; Jan 6, 2013 at 07:49 PM.
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Thank you.
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wip 2 added, seems not to have pleased many.
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Originally Posted by Metriakon View Post
The shading sucks, the outlines shouldnt be there, the lips look cut out, the other horn looking thingy doesn't look broken, looks flat. the chin looks fucked up, I do not like it.

As I had already said, it is my first head done manually.
at the precise moment of tips and not of negative criticism, how about you show me how I can improve my work?

Originally Posted by Sainzgc View Post
Pretty good. Your drawing effects are so worked. This isn't very easy.
The face are awesome, look at that details. Very good. Still making it.
8/10

thanks, I'm trying to improve.
I hope you get well.
Thank you also for the evaluation, is of great importance to me.

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sorry my bad englis Mr
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5/10 was very cruel.
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I made some improvements maybe, hopefully this time I get more compliments.
wip 3 add .
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Originally Posted by k1to View Post
Not bed, i can buy it for 500tc

do not be stupid, this is not a thread of sales.
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please, keep the same focus.
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Originally Posted by smurfing View Post
I think the actual art is good its just a bad idea and looks really unattractive and that is why everyone is being harsh although I do think you should get moreCnC

I'm open to Cnc, I hope you feel free.
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Originally Posted by hato1 View Post
Kauds, Can I help you?

yes , you can.

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here is the final work, I hope you enjoyed.

wip final

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a imagem foi redimensionada para 700x500 para a criação desta bandeira.
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Proportion it more, fix the lips other than that it's okay I guess

4/10
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