Toribash
Spar vs Hatt

You had nice flow during the spar, i liked that, your jump over hattersin i enjoyed that alot. Your realism is you and hattersin needs to work on. There was that first toe jump in there that i wasn't to sure about. I didnt notice but one or two twitches from you.

Hattersin, what you should work on is your realism (as stated in last paragraph), your flow, and twitching. I know what you tried to do but I think you used your hands in ways that were unnatural. But i think you did a good job in the spar as well.

Nice job to you two 7/10, both should work on you guy's realism and twitching.

Here is my unfinished spar with Newbutterz.
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Rawber & butterz.rpl (616.4 KB, 15 views)
Last edited by Dobby; Feb 4, 2013 at 01:00 AM.
Rawb: Your performance here is superb. The way you managed to sneak in the corks on the parts that you were recovering is impressive and the blocks you did around frame 950 or so were very nice. All of your movements throughout the spar paced very well.

Butterz: The way you performed in this spar is not as good as rawb's, but you were almost there. You managed to keep up with his movements, and your aggression here look pretty good. You twitched at some parts, but that's not really an issue, it did not look that good though. It would be nice if you managed to rectify the twitches next time

It felt as if there were few contacts sin that spar but it's incomplete, so I cannot say that as a fact. Anyways, good job you two.

8.5/10 from me.
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A spar with Warrior.
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!VSWarrior.rpl (810.5 KB, 16 views)
Sprytryne: I enjoyed that spar a lot.
Your flow was great, though at times it paused and then continued. That was displeasing. Your opener was very good and the slam was nice and clean. There was sort of a clash around the 600s mark. It understand it was warrior trying to flip you, but it was not as clean as expected. Overall a nice spar for me. 9/10

Warrior: You have a nice style. It's smooth but could use some work. The opener you used is quite...Over used. Could use a bit of your own touch imo. Your flow was great. the only time you stopped is when you got hit which was good. Teamwork ftw. The last spin you did was also good. 9/10 also

Here's a spar I did with fuze. Remember this is my first spar in like a month so I'm rusty. <3
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Spar - Fuze vs Zero.rpl (476.0 KB, 18 views)
Last edited by zeroback; Feb 8, 2013 at 03:34 PM.
[SyN][Enigma][Inquisition][CREAM][Evil]
Time for me to get off my ass and cnc something finally.

Overall your movement is kinda loose, which can be awkward at times but isn't too much
of a problem imo.
The opener/beginning I liked, you look like you have like springy shoes or something,
the jump over fuzeboy's head was rather nice. The movment/recovery afterwards looks
a little awkward, as well as the punch, but that was just due to how close your hand
was to your opponents head. The swipe to fuzeboy's head was nice, the recovery
after that coo as well. The spin that came next looked real pretty and added a bit more
to the spar. the kick you did afterword looked a bit weird due to you hitting with the side
of your foot, and the movement to the pose was awkward, but I can understand why.
The pose itself was nice. Overall it looks like you know what
you're doing, but as you said, you're rusty.

0/10 hold your neck more scrub


Here's a short spar with LucidSpore, I edited the ending a bit since the original
was rushed because he wanted to get some sleep or something.
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Spar with LucidSpore2.rpl (312.5 KB, 13 views)
Last edited by Nearly; Feb 10, 2013 at 03:35 PM.
wow that
sucked
Alrighty.

The opener is a bit generic and the twist that follows could have been waaaay
better, but the twist that comes after that looks rather coo. I feel that
you had your arms at your sides through everything up until the punch though.
speaking of the punch it looks pretty cool, and the kick combo looked nice
as well, it's a shame that the kick itself didn't connect well because of your
opponents positioning and weird block. that bit where you stand up looks
awful, and the pause was.. iunno, it shouldn't have been there. You could
have made that kick, I don't know why you decided to hold the knee.
the recovery after was bad.
the pose was a pose.



latest and not greatest.
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first warning, Velair.
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Spar with TamaKuu.rpl (588.0 KB, 10 views)
Last edited by Nearly; Mar 3, 2013 at 11:22 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
wow that
sucked