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zeto's replay thread

Yepyep I'm going to try this again, hopefully it wont die out.
Most of my replays will contain manips so for all you manip lovers, this thread is for you.
not anymore you donkey

Starting this off with one of my favorites.
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Z - Assasinated.rpl (434.8 KB, 407 views)
Last edited by zeto; Dec 18, 2013 at 07:39 PM.
'u'
Very good. Would've liked if you got uke to maybe spin more in any way.
At 450 it gets abit wierd with the touching and i think you could've gotten that first dm into a boom.
Very good flow throughout the replay though.
PM me with any and all questions
Thanks alot you guys, all these comments make me smile. ^^
Laxo, hearing that a replay of mine reminds you of largekilla means alot since I admire him alot.
Thanks.

I guess I'll go ahead and post a new replay, who would've guessed it's another manip.
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Z - R.I.A v2.rpl (262.4 KB, 155 views)
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Thanks for this great CnC!
Really makes me pumped to create more for you guys. ^^
I'll be away for 1-2 days but I've got a new replay ready to get uploaded once I get back home.
'u'
Here's the new replay!
If you have any creative ideas on how I can continue it feel free to share them, and if not I still love me some useful CnC.
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Z - Hammer.rpl (182.8 KB, 98 views)
'u'
Simple manip, good enough.
I don't like grabbing right after a manip. It just shows you couldn't get to him very well.
The first hit was pretty solid, nothing to complain here. The second one was pretty cool, I liked it.
That neck bothers me. Kill it.
oh yeah
Righteo, fixed a proper ending. The replay suddenly became much more enjoyable imo.

Did it please you enough pusga?
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Z - Hammerskeet.rpl (340.6 KB, 84 views)
'u'
Needs more boomhits. Also, never manip just a little. If you're going to manip you need to do it for the entire replay, don't let Uke hit the ground inbetween. Skeet looked weak because of the low speed and how it landed before the head instead of the other way around.
I could get two boomhits, but that would ruin the double arm and leg DM.
About the manip, he didn't touch the ground until the handstand (I worked on the kick to get that landing)
I agree on the skeet though.
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i like the manip, the bad part is that it is small

i also like the torso dm, pretty powerful there

keep practising, you'll get even better