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Opener looked nice, along with the decap. However the decap looked kinda weak.
There was a part in the opener where you contracted your neck and then extended right away and it looked pretty weird.
The 2nd kick would've looked alot better as a boom in this case.
Pose and transition to pose looked good, I liked the spin. <:
Overall no real flow issues, do more sambo grav replays.

I don't think the decap looked that weak, I actually liked it.
I liked how you held Uke after the hits, don't see that a lot.
The pec kick was alright, not extremely interesting.

Not an excellent replay, but the movement was nice.

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That was some smooth moves you got there.
The opener was smooth and had a nice constant speed going. I don't have anything to say about it.
The transition into the decap was fluid and the decap itself was really clean. Nice job on that.
Not sure how to feel about the hold all on uke after each DM.
The launch to kick was executed nicely, but the single dm sort of killed the vibe of Uke-bashing.
Well, I was hoping for a boom. :c
But, everything was smooth and fit together very well.
The only thing I didn't like was the stiff spin to the pose.
Nevertheless, fluid replay you got here, bro.

look more sambo

also this is only a WIP, tell me what to do with it. I'm getting nowhere

thanks april

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