Okay, Had some computer issues but now im back

Cnc for DinosawrRawr

Beggining jump was a little odd with the direction and rotation
otherwise you landed it pretty neat and made a step, tho diddnt like
that you went into a reverse leg sweap, kinda ruined the flow for a little
well, affter the leg sweep you keept upp with pretty nice spins and 360 kicks
tho you might have used a little bit to much off lumbar, Then ther's where you
set upp for those dubbel flipps, the first one is astonoshing then you land for another
flip, good flow in both and pretty good posisioning, then you do 2 and a punch into the ground, last punch might be a little twitchy but it went with the k.o,


Pretty neat spar, Gj rate it 7/10
You where a liiiitle twitchy at times and did some littel
wierd moves, but nothing realy critical,hands
in every cirkular kick you do,and
try not to use but otherwise
you have potential to become even better
just keep sparring and practiceing,


-Xioi



Spar i did with Hattersin

Oh man you guys.... you... you guys..
how about you try again.
Luthery, give more constructive criticism
Meap, look at the first post.
Isolations, you were a teacher, don't be a loser.
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Cnc to Sokitzu

Ehm, i take it as your kengee?
because your name ''Sokitzu'' issnt in the replay



Try keeping boddy lower when your running
Nice turning into a neat punch, exelent backstep
into pretty nice walk/run, then nice contact while
your going over your opponent, and then nice k.o'ish
landing,

8/10. keep it up

Please read the first post, kengee.
Posts deleted, thanks dobbo

Alright, for everyone who's just come back or is new here, read the first post.

It clearly states:

Originally Posted by Athin

When you post a replay, you must provide C&C for the last replay.

kthx

Cnc, to luthery

Nice walk untill you twitch turn your chest, not a fan off it but okay punch afterwards
Then landing into a spin and uppto a jump forwards(verry nicely done)into a trick
pretty nice, maybie a littel twitchy push off but still good, and epic pose landing.
Then nice backwards kick and then you made some awkward movemen with your arms
but then into 2 other kicks wich made it great and spin down to a pose,

verry nice indeed, tho keep the shouts out off a spar next time ;)
and you have verry nice movement and such
8/10


A replay i did with chazer :I

#Luthery.

Neat start, little chest twitchy maybie but still neat.
nice precision and stable punch, then nice dodge going into
a pretty neat spinkick, then verry nice spin with flowed boddy
neatly done the kick uppwards with a lot off balance(gj on that)
Little fast with contracting elbows but then a nice punch with
a turn, then that kick, verry nicely done nice balance into smexy pose


Gj overall, nice realism/flow
keep out the twitch movements and it's perfect
8/10 =)

Spar i did with Hattersin

/offtopic,help

Try opening the replay in notepad and change uke,tori names to Luthery,other guy
on uke/tori ; D

wooo. Delete party

Anyways, luthery, that spar was rather.... uneventful. You two only made contact once, and that kick didn't looked so good either. You just bonked your head to your opponents head and walked it off like it was no big deal. The way you moved was rather slow. It looks nice at some parts, it's quite decent actually. The way you two moved when both of you were closing in each other went well, but the rest, it was just hitting air. There's no problem with the way you move, but you should make it so that you look like your fighting your opponent.
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Long time since I posted here. A spar with lshkyleXD. That is an "l" not an "i" at his username

Try a little harder and read the rules.

It's really not that hard.