Toribash
knightz4: Looks OK so far. Be careful where you put the lighter/darker shades. E.g. below WA(termark), the frame of the visor looks as though it is protruding outwards. Layout looks nice, tracing it, meh. Would you be able to fix those orange parts, so they have a clearer shape? Does it look good in-game (layout wise?)

K, p0w.
Originally Posted by Berc View Post
I am looking for a theme for the new job is just, I can do 50k request (full hand-drawn). Can you wait me?

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But my competitors dengue very good =(

I can wait. There's no rush.
Berc: The face looks fine, maybe add the slight facial hair. I'm not sure what it is about the lips, eh. I don't like the hair though. Look at the reference, and bring the front up more, then have it flow past the cheek and downwards. The hair's also streaky brown.

Dengue: =[ Was looking forward to it. Oh well. Thanks anyway (I could wait if it's time you're worried about.)
Last edited by Deuteria; Apr 15, 2013 at 01:49 AM.
Berc:
The hair should be strands. Look how the hair falls over the left side of the face.
The eye brighter, and a more defined shape of the light around it.
The face is great. But I don't like the top lip.
The mutated side should be darker, and the chin should be slightly illuminated around it.

Follow the reference more closely and it should turn out great.

knightz:
Are you using gimp? Instead of posting a spinning globe, create a spinning globe, but save it as a png. Removing layers so it turns, and then save it again. So you can post the head from different angles while stationary.
Last edited by Deuteria; Apr 17, 2013 at 04:27 AM.
I'll show you what I mean when I get home.

~ETA 6 hours.
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I'll show you what I mean when I get home.

~ETA 6 hours.
Last edited by Deuteria; Apr 18, 2013 at 01:21 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Oh right. I had forgotten about that, Berc.

I was meaning once I finished doing the things that needed to be done.

I'll do it in the next while.

Edit:

Ok, so this is kind of what I was meaning.

From the reference, the hair is more defined, actual strands and detailed.
The lips.
The mutated side is much darker, almost black.
The bright eye and around it has a much brighter hue.

So here's the reference:


I'm trying to show you, instead of using words, so here's what should be included. Note that I rushed this, so it's not done well.

The brightness


The darkness


The hair


The lips (note that only half the lips are easily visible)
Last edited by Deuteria; Apr 18, 2013 at 12:15 PM.