Toribash
Originally Posted by Vordred View Post
Hatt here

Lolled. Gg.

Originally Posted by Andrew77 View Post
Sorry guys not wanting cnc just posting for me to get at home.

You get it anyway flow was good throughout the whole replay but I think you should get that kick into a boom. Just takes a heap of editing.
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10/10 you know your shit.

Spar started out bad but I'm really happy with the final combo.
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Hum the opener was ok but fred should made there a double kick dont know why he didnt he have skils for that, dont know why he fall down as it is a ko and your kick touched his ellbow.And there was a good kick and a nice fast kicking combo from you and the last kick and the all replay would be better if fred didnt waited for you to ko him.
Important: the ko should look like you really beat him, like you checkmate him so he havent any soulutions to dodge it or block or even better to counter it. It need to look like you actualy beat him.
But the reaply was really great if we are not looking at those things, there was much better things like smooth moving fast momentum and all is flowed, a really nice spar.
Originally Posted by Crocap View Post
and the all replay would be better if fred didnt waited for you to ko him.
Important: the ko should look like you really beat him, like you checkmate him so he havent any soulutions to dodge it or block or even better to counter it. It need to look like you actualy beat him.

I hope you're aware that you're awesome at explaining these things and very smart with it.

Also, asked hattersin a while ago about the rule being
if you post a replay, you MUST provide some sort of cnc on the last replay if there hasn't been any already
opinions?

also have this replay
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Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

The opener was really nice just the hand was in a weird position. the way how you was spining was also great the kick really nice clean and powerful. the second kick also really nice then I saw that you turned grab on on your right hand(603 frame) and you didnt grabed with it. Your left hand was grabed on 19 frames b4 you grabed uke.You were there at the last kick really disbalanced so the grab and the kick didnt looked nice. And the pose was great, would be better if you were going there for a triple kick with no grab but the replay over all its realy good!
Cnc. yiss.
Opener was cool and unique. The first 10 frames felt like nothing new but the way you turn it into that wide stand is epic. That left shoulder at 750 is something I guess people would complain on but personally I don't mind. Replay continues all fancy until that insane kick which you should get a half-polished medal for. The way you stop the rotation for a moment then directly accelerate into a new one is epic. It adds much to the stylish part of the replay. Good work with getting uke into a position you can work with by tapping him with your hand. However at 600 your arms seem to get a bit twitchy and as cro mentioned the grab was meh. (You can edit that out in notepad without consequences though ;p) Beautifull follow up boom on that. Spin after was ok but I like how you transferred into the pose from that. For the post I think relaxing elbows a bit more and getting a more "finished" pose like you just ended the fight.
Overall the replay was great and the fact that you got single dm's with boomforce makes it look fantastic.
There also appears like you swallowed someone. +5 points to gryffindor.
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