Yeah I agree april, that's what taking a break does to you. :[
Next replay will be incredibly stylish.

I'd love some more comments while I work on my newest replay for the 2nd replay challenge.

That grab cost you a lot of damage and I don't really like grabbing rigth after the opener.
Decap is quite strange, and the next few punches looked messy.
The joint juggling was pretty cool. The next two kicks were alright two, but I'm not sure if I would have grabbed for it. To be honest, I'm not even sure if I would go for it because I would have to hit it on the ground and that's lame and boring.
Pretty cool how you grabbed the joint right after it fell, but you sat down and it would have been so much cooler if you just stood up while still holding it.

Finally the buttmaster is back.

There comes a time when you've seen something enough that it isn't really cool anymore.
That'd be the case with -30 gravity manips.


Anyway, the opener was okay, but it looked twitchy fast. the manip itself is okay/cool, but
your head getting hit constantly was a bit of a turn off. I understand that it'd be hard not to, but...


I don't know if it shows up this way to anyway else, but your replay to me is glitched.
regardless the first kick was okay,
but it seemed to lack power. that transition to the
second kick was good, but the kick itself was just bad.

Everybody seems to have this mindset that the first thing you should do on Uke is to boom the chest, and then do something to the glutes. Uke has other joints, you know.

So, manip was good, but fucking hell you slammed your head on Uke a whole lot. It's hard in -30, but if you already know it's going to look bad then don't do it unless the rest really makes up for it.
And in this case, it really didn't. I already said that the chest boomhit was very generic, and the ass kick wasn't solid and was unnecessarily messy. Seems like you worked on the manip and then you just wanted to do whatever to finish the replay. Don't do that, if you can't find inspiration then wait a day and it will be there the next day.

Newest thing

Great replay ZeTo, I loved the opener and the first kick, but as agreed with Crooked
it would of been better if you've got the head dm with the kick, but still over all great
replay and nice abs slam thing to the ground dm if I saw right.

After tons of editing I finally improved the torso DM.

Great change, I like the torso slam boom shit to the ground, and great job on posing.